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MaCRonI
11-28-06, 11:33 PM
It's the mac nigguhz!!!! Shyaa!!! i'm comin in here now yo. SOHH, I'm hit ya'll with that junlge rap like Jeru the damaja hit ya'll with 94 for with dat debut!!! Watch me expand!!!!


King of the Jungle, humble supreme ruler of a heavily wooded galaxy/
Or a forested fallacy, a florescent fault in me, humans never seemed foul to me/
At least from all I see, I believed, or what I could conceive/
There was evil in the world, but man was not the seed/
But I was always entangled by their roots, moorins of extortion/
Exploring for ways of distortion, implorin for animal orphans/
Insurin’ that they eventually succeed in wildlife’s abortion/
But the **** ,like the Madden Challenge, my kingdom was hard to win/
My jungle was large like story mode of elder scrolls morrowind/
their interference would be short like MF Doom’s lyrics on “Accordion”/
So I wasn’t worryin’, all though my ape ambassador was warned me of war/
Describin’ machete swords that leave leaves with shredded sleeves and bloody sores/
I started as a creature livin’ in the gaps between industrial residents/
My arrogance made me underrate man’s diligence, human privileges/
To kill militant when pillagin’ my wildlife villages/
Paradise remnants, lost when man began to seek nature benefits/
Pains indefinite, shook up Pelicans as humans began meddlin’/
Perceived our ways as a lack of intelligence, ignoring its pure elegance/
Occasional tourist transformed into construction workers down to deforest/
With large bobcats, mechanical gats, crush of the trees internal organs/
birds flutter to spread the word, Migration of several herds who heard the word/
Unnerved, my death observed like Titanic before it was hit by the Iceberg/

#1rapper
11-29-06, 06:33 PM
....that shyt was nice...sohh needs more of that type of shyt..it was on in all areas, flow, content..big leap up..

MaCRonI
11-30-06, 12:12 AM
Good lookin' yo!

Verbinh
11-30-06, 12:34 AM
THE FUKK I'M TALKING ABOUT!!!!!!!!!!



:cool:



I commend you, you are a very fast learner. I stress the importance of RHYMING MULTI'S!!!!!


Do it 'til your nerves hurt. Do it til you're rhyming 10 syllables per bar and still maintaining coherence. That's skill my friend.


Good shiit.


Now take this shiit in the cypher thread, cuz i'm tired of killing mothafukkas in that room.



CHEA!!!!

yaga
11-30-06, 01:11 AM
yo, lol... your concepts are crazy, man. Refreshing. Nade me think of Tyler's best quote in Fight Club...

"In the world I see - you are stalking elk through the damp canyon forests around the ruins of Rockefeller Center. You'll wear leather clothes that will last you the rest of your life. You'll climb the wrist-thick kudzu vines that wrap the Sears Tower. And when you look down, you'll see tiny figures pounding corn, laying strips of venison on the empty car pool lane of some abandoned superhighway."

And you killed it with that last line, man...

"...birds flutter to spread the word, Migration of several herds who heard the word / unnerved, my death observed like Titanic before it was hit by the Iceberg ./"

- Sick. I gotta dust off and get down now... this sh*t's cool.

MaCRonI
12-02-06, 04:07 PM
Thanks yo...I work hard to gets mine!!!!