Untitled - Pun Intended/GEO

[sexydeltagirl]

Let my words make love to your mind...
And my metaphors dance in your heart...
Allow my nouns and pronouns to romance your soul...
As they sparkle in a descriptive nature....
Allow my adjectives to give standing ovations to your being...
They will and shall make you even more stellar in all of your grandeur...
My similes and adverbs lose their meaning when trapped in your smile...
Your eyes make my vowels blush and giggle...
Waiting patiently for them to blink I sigh...
They see through my contractions and "ing's"....
They see right through me...
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My heart gives dazzling soliloquies in your honor...
I don't need a thesaurus, dictionary or a remedial English lesson...
My Ebonics lines flow like injections...
They find their place between the here and now...
Living vicariously through the past tense of have.
They had longed for you then….
And they long for you now...
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The whispers of your moans impinge upon my tristful spirit and uplift it...
With complex synonyms and antonyms worthy of incessant praise...
You are a living pun and I live for your opalescent dictation....

[O_Cyrus]

"Words have no legs, yet they walk." - its an African proverb that I thought about after reading your poems.

The use of the elements of language and the words themselves are really vivid. I could envision, in reality, what you wrote would look like.

Excellent work.

[dormircommeunsonneur]

Actions may speak louder than words, yet it's the words that make sense of our actions. - I enjoyed this!

[sexydeltagirl]

Thanks guys, I actually wrote this piece for someone and wanted to change the name cause we are no longer @ this place...

But at the time my heart spoke these words so I decided to leave it just like it is.....