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ziax215
11-18-06, 08:56 PM
Pale pink panties
Wet
I'm so ready
Why
Aren't you here
Yet?
Pent up passion
Makes me wait
Impatiently
Body insisting that
You come out
And play with me
My fantasy
Consists of you
Shamelessly tasting me
Whole body shaking
When you start
Penetrating me
Long strokes
Short strokes
Keeping pace with me
Heart beating real fast-
Like you're racing me
I'm tryna move away
But you're chasing me
Its getting hot in here
Damn
Your touch is blazing heat
You turn me over
Slap my a$$
And I just roll with it
Baby it feels so good
No matter how you hit
Hands grippin the sheets
You rubbin on my cl!t
Its dripping on the bed
And we don't give a sh!t
I'm growling
And grunting
Like an animal
My animalistic side
Must be in control
Oh my god
Don't stop
You 'bout to take me there
Oh....Oh....Oh....
Why aren't you here?????
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You can guess where my mind was at on this one

Enlil
11-18-06, 09:09 PM
Dayum!


That whole **** was HOT FIYA!!!

Mad Decriptive-Flow was very smooth and progressive which made the reading easy to go with and you just wanted to read more...

Mad skillz babe!

sexydeltagirl
11-19-06, 12:40 PM
Ummmm, this is - what's the word HOT! goodness...the way you broke it up make it even more intense cause I read it that way...

Good stuff!

Advent Verbal Kent
11-20-06, 03:59 PM
:: Wipes steam off of computer monitor to read the next line ::



AvK

Mr.November+
11-20-06, 04:42 PM
Philly rolls HARD:guilty:

ziax215
11-21-06, 08:32 PM
i'm so excited to be upped!
thanx for the love!

tom-arnold
12-04-06, 07:26 AM
that sh!t is good alrite!!!!not sure if i enjoyed it coz of ur skillz or the pictures it put in my head-wateva it is keep it up!!!!