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sexydeltagirl
11-18-06, 01:19 PM
Wait, wait heart....
Please tell me you haven't taken a liking to this fellow...
The one that makes you skip like a school girl on her way to class...
If I could record the sounds you make I'm sure your cooing at his accent...
Remember when he tried to hear you beating...
It felt like you wanted to come out of my chest....
He has some kinda hold on you....
Please tell me me that you don't wonder if he's thinking about you...
Willing to take good care of you...
Respecting your importance....
Your priceless value....
It's like you and my brain are a tag team...
Sitting patiently she daydreams about him wanting to see him with such anticipation that you stop beating for a few seconds...
This wasn't apart of the plan...
It was supposed to be just a one night stand....
We parted ways on clouds with nines on them...
Imprinted flashbacks manifested themselves into my brain....
I must have an abberation - I need to meditate....
Some quick remedy to keep this from happening....
Heart?!
We aren't ready for this remember...
We aren't quite over the other Aladdin...
Remember, we nicknamed him that after that magic carpet ride he took us on...
Then we crashed and burned - we cried tears and we asked that GOD take the barong out your left vessell....
Now we are back at it again....
Falling rather quickly....
You never cease to amaze me...
So with the holidays coming up....
He's asked what's on your wish list...
You smile and say - just you lightly packaged....
I applaud your honesty...
But dammit heart...
Slow down!
Don't fall in love just yet....

Irish-dipstick
11-18-06, 07:10 PM
Wait, wait heart....
Please tell me you haven't taken a liking to this fellow...
The one that makes you skip like a school girl on her way to class...
If I could record the sounds you make I'm sure your cooing at his accent...
Remember when he tried to hear you beating...
It felt like you wanted to come out of my chest....
He has some kinda hold on you....
Please tell me me that you don't wonder if he's thinking about you...
Willing to take good care of you...
Respecting your importance....
Your priceless value....
It's like you and my brain are a tag team...
Sitting patiently she daydreams about him wanting to see him with such anticipation that you stop beating for a few seconds...
This wasn't apart of the plan...
It was supposed to be just a one night stand....
We parted ways on clouds with nines on them...
Imprinted flashbacks manifested themselves into my brain....
I must have an abberation - I need to meditate....
Some quick remedy to keep this from happening....
Heart?!
We aren't ready for this remember...
We aren't quite over the other Aladdin...
Remember, we nicknamed him that after that magic carpet ride he took us on...
Then we crashed and burned - we cried tears and we asked that GOD take the barong out your left vessell....
Now we are back at it again....
Falling rather quickly....
You never cease to amaze me...
So with the holidays coming up....
He's asked what's on your wish list...
You smile and say - just you lightly packaged....
I applaud your honesty...
But dammit heart...
Slow down!
Don't fall in love just yet....

yep everyone goes through this i think u rather expressed it well got the story across i have to say ur style is very unorthadox but i like it...i can relate to this from a few years back i made a mad mistake remember choose the right path on this love sh1t bby it can take u mad places...with either choice....

dopeness...:king:

Nadira...Rare
11-20-06, 05:24 PM
OMG i swear you always get me... feeling that way right this very instant

sexydeltagirl
11-28-06, 11:47 AM
yep everyone goes through this i think u rather expressed it well got the story across i have to say ur style is very unorthadox but i like it...i can relate to this from a few years back i made a mad mistake remember choose the right path on this love sh1t bby it can take u mad places...with either choice....
dopeness...:king:

yay! i'm glad you can relate to it and honestly that's all I want folks to come away with when reading my pieces - I give it 2 you straight just the way my heart gives it to me - and when someone connects with that it's no greater feeling in the world....

And I'll try to make the right choices but sometimes the right choice is covered with lies and deception either way I keep....

Thanks for peeping this joint love....:)

sexydeltagirl
11-28-06, 11:50 AM
OMG i swear you always get me... feeling that way right this very instant
And you seem to get me as well - This piece is so real to me that when I wrote it I couldn't stop laughing....
Good luck mama!!!:hug:

subc
11-28-06, 10:28 PM
girl...you just.......

yeah.