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MaCRonI
10-18-06, 12:42 AM
Remember lupe's jonit The Cool...we here's my version of it!!!!!!!!!!1

Two days after nine-eleven, the sun slowly sink below the heavens/
A full moon rose as thoughts begin hittin’ a deceased poets head again/
Midnight of September 13th, While hip hopheads mourn and pensively think/
Ashes of a great MC comin’ in sync, milky eyes blink, old life on the brink/
of a true Resurrection, his new albums and movies was only whispered hint/
Pieces of man comin' together through the wind, glue together like cement/
Remberin’ his old metaphor about the poor pickin’ the lock of rich man’s door/
And with roundhouse kick, Life’s door was kick down by a ghoulish Shakur/
Straight off the hinges, first thoughts of Tupac as to return to binge/
drinkin', no blood we was leakin' as he pluckin' the bullets out his skin/
Into a liquor store broke in,2 bottles of gin stolen, open his mouth tried drinkin'/
He taste nothin', gums no longer bumpin', just chipped bone in his mouth and/
guzzle a 40 ounce., but it'll pour all out, like he was alcoholic fountain/
Pirates of the Caribbean, went Through his ribs like Captain Barbosa/
furious stare a the liquor store owna, angry havin' to remain soba/
felt his head find a skeletal hairdo, felt his stomach lookin' for an old tattoo/
Thug Life inked in black, but look down, a lil' confused/
Dude had no stomach, just a space with a spinal cord/
unplugged from life's outlet, so for a woods twig he looked for/
picked a Popsicle stick of the ground, Poked it into some mud/
A ghost of the belly of Makaveli was scripted the life of a thug/
"Thug Life" smudged on his living corpse, from there plot his course/
to find killer who showed no remorse, thought his life a sport/
so with what seemed the remains of a gansgta lean with decayed must/
He limped to Las Vegas, where Suge Knight and his remains was/

feed back?

MaCRonI
10-28-06, 03:46 PM
feed!!!

MaCRonI
11-07-06, 12:08 PM
C'mon ya'll hook me up with a feed...........

MaCRonI
11-23-06, 03:11 AM
C'mon ya'll hook a ***** up with some feed....

#1rapper
11-24-06, 05:39 PM
good imagery.....rhymes were alright, but i was definetly feelin the content..good ish

MaCRonI
11-26-06, 07:33 PM
Finally...thank you..fam...peep don't feed here..it gets feed for real....

themixstudio
11-27-06, 03:12 PM
I see a lot of folks through here that arn't this good. Pretty good stuff!! If it were me, and I'm not hatin', just creative critisism..... don't get it wrong....... watch some of the rhymes. Kinda Jr. High at times but works good man. A LOT BETTER THAN MOST I SEE THROUGH MY STUDIO EVERYDAY!!!!'

Jai
www.themixstudio.com

MaCRonI
11-28-06, 11:28 PM
Thanx mix, you gotta feed my thanksgiving shizzit yo!!!! i'mo hit ya'll ***** with part II later!!!!

MaCRonI
12-02-06, 04:19 PM
more feed?

Cali_Bud
12-04-06, 05:56 PM
Agreed, Hot Drop. Nice wordplay in the beginning, it take's a bit to rap about one subject and keep it there.:cool:

MaCRonI
12-04-06, 10:19 PM
No bout niggies!!!!you knows I does it big!!!!