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[Nadira...Rare]

You compromised your integrity the moment you spoke to me
Your voice whispered confusion in the underbelly of your conversation...
Yet I chose to ignore it
Your speech providing me comfort but your lips echoed lies
Your eyes screamed "don't trust me and I pretended not to hear it...
Because I fell in love with the dream gleaming from them
The goosebumps from your touch said "warning... this dude is a player"
But your voice quieted the caution with those terms of endearment
And I L-O-V-E you...
And all you could say is word....
But baby that word doesn't reflect how I feel about you
and I believed your game... So caught up in your wordplay...
I missed the part about you having a girlfriend
And you tried your best not to catch feelings
But in me you ain't know what you were dealing
And catching feelings is just like catching the flu
I got you... and you got her
and this **** is getting so old
So Ring the alarm... we be through it too long
But now you mad when you see another Nicca on my arm
Casn you believe that shyt?\
Had it in your head that you were irreplaceable
But your apetite for woman was insatiable
But how can I complain?
I put up with it for so long
and the very second I was through, found me somebody new...
Here we stand
I walked through fire to deaden my desire for you
But it just won't go away
And here I stand with you... the voice of temptation
But weve changed positions...
I am the one with everything to lose
I have the opportunity to chose...
but who would it be?
You with the smile that spoke of forgiveness and pain
Or him who's body only ever said I can love you
Damn

[sexydeltagirl]

You compromised your integrity the moment you spoke to me
Your voice whispered confusion in the underbelly of your conversation...
Yet I chose to ignore it
Your speech providing me comfort but your lips echoed lies
Your eyes screamed "don't trust me and I pretended not to hear it...
Because I fell in love with the dream gleaming from them
The goosebumps from your touch said "warning... this dude is a player"
But your voice quieted the caution with those terms of endearment
And I L-O-V-E you...
And all you could say is word....
But baby that word doesn't reflect how I feel about you
and I believed your game... So caught up in your wordplay...
I missed the part about you having a girlfriend
And you tried your best not to catch feelings
But in me you ain't know what you were dealing
And catching feelings is just like catching the flu
I got you... and you got her
and this **** is getting so old
So Ring the alarm... we be through it too long
But now you mad when you see another Nicca on my arm
Casn you believe that shyt?\
Had it in your head that you were irreplaceable
But your apetite for woman was insatiable
But how can I complain?
I put up with it for so long
and the very second I was through, found me somebody new...
Here we stand
I walked through fire to deaden my desire for you
But it just won't go away
And here I stand with you... the voice of temptation
But weve changed positions...
I am the one with everything to lose
I have the opportunity to chose...
but who would it be?
You with the smile that spoke of forgiveness and pain
Or him who's body only ever said I can love you
Damn

Now that's how you end a poem! you left me stuck like what is she gonna do? I tell you one thing life is crazy and folks may say this but it's those times when things like this happen that you think how the hell did I end up here and one wrong decision can cost you everything...

Stay up mama!

[Nadira...Rare]

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Now that's how you end a poem! you left me stuck like what is she gonna do? I tell you one thing life is crazy and folks may say this but it's those times when things like this happen that you think how the hell did I end up here and one wrong decision can cost you everything...
Stay up mama!

I totally agree with that last sentence. Thanks so much for the love... Just wait for the second part... living with the decisions made is the hardest part of life.

[Irish-dipstick]

[/B]
Now that's how you end a poem! you left me stuck like what is she gonna do? I tell you one thing life is crazy and folks may say this but it's those times when things like this happen that you think how the hell did I end up here and one wrong decision can cost you everything...
Stay up mama!

pretty much what i was gonna say

[ziax215]

I missed the part about you having a girlfriend
And you tried your best not to catch feelings
But in me you ain't know what you were dealing
And catching feelings is just like catching the flu
I got you... and you got her
and this **** is getting so old
i can definitely relate to this poem
i know first hand how hard it is to go with what your mind knows and ignore what your heart feels
and damn is the only way to sum it up
i'm feeling this

[dormircommeunsonneur]

Reading this made me think how we always go for things at the wrong time. Still, when we come back to them, it always seems better the second time around. Especially when you're seeing someone else but still have that last relationship fresh on the mind, you're only settling for second best.

[Nadira...Rare]

Reading this made me think how we always go for things at the wrong time. Still, when we come back to them, it always seems better the second time around. Especially when you're seeing someone else but still have that last relationship fresh on the mind, you're only settling for second best.

word... I totally agree :yes:

[Enlil]

I'm so glad I got a chance to read this... Funny how games go, emotions grow and you get caugt in it... This piece hits home to a lot of people...


Well written!

[Atticus]

Very well written poem. The diction and word placement are what really hit me, because of their subtlety. I loved the fact I just read, nothing stopped me abruptly, nothing seemed out of place, nothing was extrenious or short a step away from the original concept/approach. Liked it a lot.

[Nadira...Rare]

thanks sooooo much for the love and support :hug: I'm trying... part2 is here... i decided to make it a poetic story... a new character emerges

[Abs_inth da prophet]

nice

[Atticus]

I'd really apprecaite it if you could respond to my poem, Black-Sheep Abacus (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=782474) if you could. I'm new so feed is pretty slow coming.

[Abs_inth da prophet]

I'd really apprecaite it if you could respond to my poem, Black-Sheep Abacus (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=782474) if you could. I'm new so feed is pretty slow coming.

keep droppin..

I'll check it out in a min.

[Mr.November+]

I dont know how i missed this but this i a great poem...