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Invisible Vision
10-12-06, 01:05 AM
Its been on my mind, while i'm killin some time
the reasons that my people are still in rewind
i try to sit n' remind my self of generous times...
but 90% of us are starvin, n we're still on the grind...

so i'm fittin to find, answers... but shlt doesn't rhyme
eyes closed
i lay my pen on my pad... and pray they get intertwined...

cuz i don't write raps, i right truths../ and luther pin em' to doors/
i hurry back and ignite roots... growing whispers from roars...

martin was reversed from the norms, malcom thirsted for storms
we're not some black I on society, that hurts when it forms...

i certainly mourn for those who will not eat what their fed...
weak but not dead... scream revolution! you'll bleed from the head
plant change- seeds in a bed... that i weave as you've read...
shhhhhh....
...see freedom ain't a battle cry, its a secret the spreads


had to let a few ideas escape... don't mind the rust, it'll blow away

Advent Verbal Kent
10-12-06, 08:46 AM
I'm diggin these lines...

"but 90% of us are starvin, n we're still on the grind..."

"cuz i don't write raps, i right truths../ and luther pin em' to doors"

"...see freedom ain't a battle cry, its a secret that spreads"


AvK

Propaganda
10-15-06, 01:22 PM
Its been on my mind, while i'm killin some time
the reasons that my people are still in rewind
i try to sit n' remind my self of generous times...
but 90% of us are starvin, n we're still on the grind...
so i'm fittin to find, answers... but shlt doesn't rhyme
eyes closed
i lay my pen on my pad... and pray they get intertwined...
cuz i don't write raps, i right truths../ and luther pin em' to doors/
i hurry back and ignite roots... growing whispers from roars...
martin was reversed from the norms, malcom thirsted for storms
we're not some black I on society, that hurts when it forms...
i certainly mourn for those who will not eat what their fed...
weak but not dead... scream revolution! you'll bleed from the head
plant change- seeds in a bed... that i weave as you've read...
shhhhhh....
...see freedom ain't a battle cry, its a secret the spreads
had to let a few ideas escape... don't mind the rust, it'll blow away

that sh!t really picked up steam from the luther pin'em line on. pretty nice stuff IV.

spanky freedom
10-15-06, 11:22 PM
i really felt this.
makes me think of the panthers
and that whole movement that was
stressing community unity and self sufficiency

while the end of the rhyme kind of reminds us
that that spirit still lingers on the low and some day
will rise if it is not already rising slowly and steadily

just by you being aware and feeling this i would
say it is rising slowly and steadily. It could go generations
just make sure u keep feeding the vision to the children
nawimean

true

Invisible Vision
10-16-06, 01:02 AM
nin-jani

molo molo

Vietnametry
10-17-06, 09:08 AM
Its been on my mind, while i'm killin some time
the reasons that my people are still in rewind
i try to sit n' remind my self of generous times...
but 90% of us are starvin, n we're still on the grind...
so i'm fittin to find, answers... but shlt doesn't rhyme
eyes closed
i lay my pen on my pad... and pray they get intertwined...
cuz i don't write raps, i right truths../ and luther pin em' to doors/
i hurry back and ignite roots... growing whispers from roars...
martin was reversed from the norms, malcom thirsted for storms
we're not some black I on society, that hurts when it forms...
i certainly mourn for those who will not eat what their fed...
weak but not dead... scream revolution! you'll bleed from the head
plant change- seeds in a bed... that i weave as you've read...
shhhhhh....
...see freedom ain't a battle cry, its a secret the spreads
had to let a few ideas escape... don't mind the rust, it'll blow away
This is nice. Got audio?

Nasty Manny
10-17-06, 07:56 PM
nice multis through the whole verse