Ex-lover On My Mind

[Irish-dipstick]

Re-inventing the rejection of my reflection this world knows nothing but perfectionI’m suspect to inspection my name being framed by my countries political shameI wish I was back being a new born because my life scorn isn’t worth it no moreI tired of living silent don’t like being violent but my fist are ready I’m being trappedUntil I can’t take it I’m out of place I’m in my own face and I’ve got my shoes ready Because my emotional boat isn’t steady my emotions explode on a page because I feel rage I’ve got to escape this cage new countries in wait for me to explore my love for the lord is unequalled but only but one but I cant say her name as the very essence makes me smile and I got to be hard as my life as got many faces I cant wait to meet new friends in new places my feeling misplaced in the darkness but I will find my light Because I never give up I stay strong my night is tonight and I’m not wrong I’m always right but that’s what cost me my only love and this poem is from the heart had to feel it when my heart bloody leaking and I seen her today but my body ceased speaking…..

[Irish-dipstick]

upping##:king:

[Abs_inth da prophet]

nice.

keep writing..
keep playing with the similies and metaphors..keep trying to switch up your rhyme schemes...you'll end up writing all kinds of different pieces in different styles...

the more you do the better you get (thats everybody)
so keep goin..

I like being a witness to the growth..

[Abs_inth da prophet]

I like your lyrics here...just gonna flip it a lil different...


my name is suspect to inspection..
I'm being framed.....
re-inventin my reflection from the shame of a suspect in this world..
...this country...
this political pain.... makes me wish I was born again..
because I'm tired of this violence and..
I gotta escape this page of silence before I reach the end..
I'm in my own face...trapped.
in a boat of emotion tryin to get back..to..
my love...
my lord..my feelings misplaced because..
today in this ocean I saw her face..
through the darkness the very essence made me smile..
I'm tryin to stay strong all the while
..never giving up..
on this poem..or on my heart.

[Irish-dipstick]

I like your lyrics here...just gonna flip it a lil different...
my name is suspect to inspection..
I'm being framed.....
re-inventin my reflection from the shame of a suspect in this world..
...this country...
this political pain.... makes me wish I was born again..
because I'm tired of this violence and..
I gotta escape this page of silence before I reach the end..
I'm in my own face...trapped.
in a boat of emotion tryin to get back..to..
my love...
my lord..my feelings misplaced because..
today in this ocean I saw her face..
through the darkness the very essence made me smile..
I'm tryin to stay strong all the while
..never giving up..
on this poem..or on my heart.


dope man :smoker: thats the best ive seen in a while

[Irish-dipstick]

I seen her today but my body ceased speaking…..

i really did too weird that