GreyScale Sedation..

[MaCRonI]

It's the Mac..hittin' ya'll up with another DOPE KEYSTYLE>>>check my new jonit out!!!


I was just cruisin' over the old suburbia I used to call home/
classic instrumentals playin' on repeat in my dome/
entirely in the zone, for that moment hip-hop's voice/
was speakin' to my mind, bumpin' alpine, predominant noise/
made oblivious to the open road, speedin' towards my old abode/
the more speed limits I past, the faster I continue to go/
until i lost control my vehicle, in slow motion, I could see it all/
My windshield breakin' into pieces, shatter glass begins to rain,fall/
down from the side window, as my car hit a side rail/
granite on a wooded trail, deep breath I inhale, through air I sail/
I flyin' out the whip fast like Anorexics avoidin' food/
speedin' through the air, a lil woozy still confused/
until a concrete sidewalk came into my view/
few seconds, my vertebrate snapped in two/
excruciating pain anew, body bleedin a reddish hue/
hence I became one with the earth, one with the pavement/
impact crush my face in, instantly sedated/
From this earth my soul was waitin' to be taken/

[MaCRonI]

ok a brother up with a feed,please?

[Advent Verbal Kent]

This was umm...O.K.

The problem i have with it is that entire verse could of been summed up in one or two lines.

"Yesterday, I got in a car accident with no medical insurance."


AvK

[MaCRonI]

Yeah, nice feed :rolleyes:

here go a rvised version of this jonit....

I was just cruisin' over the old suburbia I used to call home/
classic instrumentals playin' on repeat in my dome/
entirely in the zone, for that moment hip-hop's voice/
was speakin' to my mind, bumpin' alpine, predominant noise/
made oblivious to the open road, speedin' towards my old abode/
the more speed limits I past, the faster I continue to go/
until i lost control my vehicle, in slow motion, I could see it all/
My windshield breakin' into pieces, shatter glass begins to rain,fall/
down from the side window, as my car hit a side rail/
granite on a wooded trail, deep breath I inhale, through air I sail/
I flyin' out the whip fast like Anorexics avoidin' food/
speedin' through the air, a lil woozy still confused/
until a concrete sidewalk came into my view/
few seconds, my vertebrate snapped in two/
excruciating pain anew, body bleedin a reddish hue/
hence I became one with the earth, one with the pavement/
impact crush my face in, instantly sedated/
From this earth my soul was waitin' to be taken/