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Irish-dipstick
09-25-06, 07:26 PM
i feel like i been trapped incased my mind misplaced
my talent nearly at wasted my face nearly digrace
nearly forgotton and the world could hear my cry
i ask why little children have to die like i was readin
and i cried when that 5 month year baby was mauled by dogs
victim of crimes it will never understand so i want to know
why does this happen in a world which is filled with madmen
where can the normal survive reach for truth stay alive
to pass on the gifted messsage from history throw god eyes
well maybe thru mine my version of hypnotic tentisees
seems to have gained me enemies who are friends to me
cause i live life not to explore and evolve i teach i like a lesson
let my mind revolve around the fact of how not to act in the future
when i return the world will be a different place different face
different kind of cold out in space...but when im confused
by the words i use i just sit back and let my pen abuse
so i can express what i thinking even though i have no clue
but who real does me you.....you....you??

Irish-dipstick
09-26-06, 06:53 PM
dang..no comments thats why i left sh1ts not worth it

Abs_inth da prophet
09-26-06, 08:23 PM
what kind of comments are u lookin for?
don't write for somebody 2 gas u...write cause u feel it...look @ the views...people are readin it...I peeped this yesterday...I was gonna drop somethin in here off it but I got busy so it didn't happen...but regardless...if YOU feel what u drop..doesn't matter what anyone else thinks....just keep writing...

peace.

homeyjay
09-27-06, 12:19 PM
what kind of comments are u lookin for?
don't write for somebody 2 gas u...write cause u feel it...look @ the views...people are readin it...I peeped this yesterday...I was gonna drop somethin in here off it but I got busy so it didn't happen...but regardless...if YOU feel what u drop..doesn't matter what anyone else thinks....just keep writing...
peace.

I agree man, you gotta write for self besides "ain't no love in da heart of the city". When I first got on da set you a had few supporters and encouragers but not so much anymore. I write for the need not to please, some will be felt and some won't, but you always gotto be true to yourself so keep it real.