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Buddah MAC
09-15-06, 03:48 AM
open sore soul soars in its suffocating cage
eyes sore as time wore thicker veils with age
sight strained to see through, little light that leaks to
the squinted slit seeking sun dispels the myth there is one
still run to where I saw horizons once
stay downwind knowing how self-despising hunts
skies have sunk to give contrast to the ruins
can navigate home off how the hopeless croon
striking bone echo lasts the neverending night
people sending plights intending it might
make family from the fellow feeling famine
a chorus of the cries have the choral group examine
the unknown place beyond pain, ache of spirit strained
alleviated, just a moment, because in that alone it
paints infinite possibility long as now is all we can claim
grin crackin the ice grill for a sec can be sustained
stained by the cold fall rain clumping summer at my feet
long as you on your own two, can't let the color tone you

Advent Verbal Kent
09-19-06, 02:56 PM
Buddah Mac pretty much kept SOHH's open mic alive.


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illpoppa
09-19-06, 02:59 PM
very nice like poetry

Wordsmyth
09-20-06, 02:37 PM
As always another nice one...