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Advent Verbal Kent
09-12-06, 01:46 PM
A silkned blanket lifted with
long extended arms miming the grace of a gust from the north.
More than feelings......More than breathing
The passionate air Dizzy
filled his face with incasing it into a mere peep.
Like silt and sea sands the difference between sheep and Sheperds are seek & see.
When seeing whatever your seeking.... you should feel.
Thats how you know its real.
More than breathing...More than Feelings.
Like that knot worthy of operation saturating a gut embalanced in acidic...thick
Then finding out the hard way the medic has no service over the herizon ...Only Verizon.
Crying in public...I mean balling an ocean while its lunch time in the city.
How do I know? The old man licks his lips and slips to the next bench.
More than feelings......More than breathing
A glutton catching his reflection in the butchers window on pay day clinching to a Payday.
Mayday?......No.....An experience.
A cirrus that sucked Antarticas untouched sweet waters seemingly is hovering over your noggin after spirited jogging.
Its more than a feeling...Its more than breathing
Its a heathen touching the void of religion for the 1st time in the same parallel stride of a crime.

More than feelings...More than Breathing...Thats how you know its real.


AvK

homeyjay
09-12-06, 04:29 PM
A silkned blanket lifted with
long extended arms miming the grace of a gust from the north.
More than feelings......More than breathing
The passionate air Dizzy
filled his face with incasing it into a mere peep.
Like silt and sea sands the difference between sheep and Sheperds are seek & see.
When seeing whatever your seeking.... you should feel.
Thats how you know its real.
More than breathing...More than Feelings.
Like that knot worthy of operation saturating a gut embalanced in acidic...thick
Then finding out the hard way the medic has no service over the herizon ...Only Verizon.
Crying in public...I mean balling an ocean while its lunch time in the city.
How do I know? The old man licks his lips and slips to the next bench.
More than feelings......More than breathing
A glutton catching his reflection in the butchers window on pay day clinching to a Payday.
Mayday?......No.....An experience.
A cirrus that sucked Antarticas untouched sweet waters seemingly is hovering over your noggin after spirited jogging.
Its more than a feeling...Its more than breathing
Its a heathen touching the void of religion for the 1st time in the same parallel stride of a crime.
More than feelings...More than Breathing...Thats how you know its real.
AvK
Man, it is like your joints are showing me what is missing in mine. The visualizations, thought provoking, intellect. I'm not just passing out flattery or nothing, but you are down with your craft and now that I know the direction I'm headed that way too. Every once in a while one tends to go off course, thanks for being my compass. Good work !!

Advent Verbal Kent
09-13-06, 08:29 AM
It feels good to be back.

AvK

homeyjay
09-13-06, 06:45 PM
It feels good to be back.
AvK
"And with a vengence at that".

Midnite
09-14-06, 09:59 PM
It feels good to be back.
AvK


good to have ya man....welcome back