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homeyjay
09-11-06, 07:07 PM
the walkway is always lit
but i prefer the shadows
see them fight for the light
many offer all that they have
the fit is not what they sought
yet a decision has been made
who makes it out and who stays
at the fork i choose the opposite
peculiar how the masses are wise
at day their chatter is blaring
in the night i hear the sadness
eyes always paint the canvas
i hear laughter as i pass by
the heart is not in junction
they stare 'til i'm not in sight
forgotten is the humbleness
sadly for the rest of our days
they all be taking many bows
but no one wants to clap
the spider webbs accumilate
we wonder what is really left
the floorboards start to creek
as the foot steps get nearer
i began to think who's next

Advent Verbal Kent
09-12-06, 09:24 AM
You was on to something until you broke down and said...

"They all be taking many bows"

...damn.


AvK

homeyjay
09-12-06, 12:50 PM
You was on to something until you broke down and said...
"They all be taking many bows"
...damn.
AvK
Man "talk about a tough crowd", naw thanks though I started not to send this out without some tweaking. I have been in a funk alot on my plate as of late, so I couldn't write but when I tried it cleared up some of the chaos though. Just tryin' a new flavor you know, I'll try and not drop the ball on da next rip, thanks for peepin' and speakin'

Advent Verbal Kent
09-12-06, 01:47 PM
I have faith in you J.

AvK

homeyjay
09-13-06, 06:47 PM
I have faith in you J.
AvK
Aww schucks, now there you go puttin' pressure on a brother, lol.
Right on though!

Verbinh
09-13-06, 09:04 PM
you killed it fam.


Reminds me of the times when i used to wait at the busstop for an extra half hour longer cuz i knew this one chick was gonna get out the later bus.


She was gorgeous.


Damn i miss those highschool days.

homeyjay
09-14-06, 10:40 AM
you killed it fam.
Reminds me of the times when i used to wait at the busstop for an extra half hour longer cuz i knew this one chick was gonna get out the later bus.
She was gorgeous.
Damn i miss those highschool days.
Aww!! highschool I remember those days oh so well, I even found the balls to talk to one and we hit it off for a while. Funny how after you get to know them (the gorgeous ones)the glamour somewhat wears off and they're just ordinary people like you and I that's why I go for substance more than the package most of the times. Thanks for the commemnts (though I'm startin' to wonder 'bout you dogg you use to wait at the bus stop for how long? j/k) gotta do what you gotta do right.