Thank you: A Poem I Named Alone

[Advent Verbal Kent]

Me? A perceptive gazing hawk startled struck.
Stuck between bark and a stalk of stark reality.
Who would of thought one could be blinded from this view...to kill
A lady lark foreplaying an orgasim by each fluid stroke of a harp
Her wrists went limp as the whites of her eyes got dark.
Have you ever seen essence in a hurry?
Maybe a soul rushing not to get burried?
I have. Come to think. We almost got married.
Until I climbed that cliff. So much truth lies in these fingertips
The blood rushed from her lips...
...as I took aim and watched their white wings carry.
Carry every thought. Every imperfection away slower than a fairy
In a merky swamp sludged....plugged with trees rooted by evil.
Civil? Why? But everything is fair in love and war. Right.
Ironic...She left me one thing that I can love and adore.
Something more amazing than any skyscrapper's perspective.
Something more pure than a sinning angel neglected of resurection
Something I can call my own...Made from our rotting flesh and bone.

A poem I named Alone


AvK

[Midnite]

Mr. Greenery and Vivid Imagery....wuz up Kent

i havce to admit, i had to read this a few times to catch the rhythm, i liked it...im not sure what about it i like exactly, but sumthin struck me

[Salah]

AvK

The Usual Suspects... Me And You And usually Neis...
Collabo...
d_sahara1@yahoo.com
hit me up

[Advent Verbal Kent]

Whats up Salah. Its been a looooooooong time. Is Neis still alive?


AvK

[Courtdog]

I see chantilly all up in ya flow son :smoker:

[W.I.Z.E.]

AvK
The Usual Suspects... Me And You And usually Neis...
Collabo...
d_sahara1@yahoo.com
hit me up

Ummm...I'd like in on this..


BTW, nice piece AVK...the middle to the end resonated more. The beginning seemed weird.

[Advent Verbal Kent]

Thanks for the peep.

Ive been known to get the "weird" comment sometimes. :laugh:

Oh...and Courtdog. I heard you managed Ruth Chris' in Fairfax and tried to have a "What's Beef? & HipHop Night" there.


AvK

[yaga]

Damn. Short response to up that rilly.

[MaCRonI]

Aight....yo straight, The rhyme scheme seemed a lil meh to me, but no hate...it's still pretty dope...

7.9/10

[W.I.Z.E.]

Aight....yo straight, The rhyme scheme seemed a lil meh to me, but no hate...it's still pretty dope...
7.9/10

lol. You dumn f@ck it's a poem.

[Advent Verbal Kent]

Its cool Mac. Theirs really no rhyme scheme...My drops are more of...lets say,"Thought Schemes"

Thanks for peepin.


AvK

[Blackeddie]

nice piece...very vividly put...peace

[Advent Verbal Kent]

Black f!ckin Eddie???? Damn son...where have you been? Stay for a while


AvK

[keylomc3]

i needed inspiration for this nap.. thanks

[Neo Regular]

You made a track some time ago and I liked it AvK...POST IT

There should be a SOHH Throwback Mixtape.