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Enlil
08-13-06, 11:21 AM
Is it so crazy...
that I've been thinking about you lately?
It's ironic that the thoughts that captivate me,
is about how distraught my life has been;
lately...
...As we once were...
But I'm not thinking how we were so...
unsettled
unbalanced
or unsure-
when we said goodbye...
As a matter of fact I...
I was...I was, thinking...
(**sigh**this is hard **sigh**)
how nice it was at the times you were by my side...
Lately...
Lately-your smile dances in my mind and this soul rememers how your touches warmed him... And noone else has or came close to make him feel in the way you once adored him...
Lately-
Lately, the trees have been shaking away their bareness and the earth has once again taken it's fresh breath of life... We spent our times playin' here with OUR worlds so alive... But not-
Lately...
Baby, time goes on and I'm here without you lately...
And the colors here aren't as bright and the birds don't sound as nice without you
lately...
And Lately...
This comfortably numb...
has turned into lonely...
Yeah it felt good not hurting for someone;
but the want for that comfort you gave me
has been growing...
Lately...

sexydeltagirl
08-15-06, 12:49 PM
Is it so crazy...
that I've been thinking about you lately?
It's ironic that the thoughts that captivate me,
is about how distraught my life has been;
lately...
...As we once were...
But I'm not thinking how we were so...
unsettled
unbalanced
or unsure-
when we said goodbye...
As a matter of fact I...
I was...I was, thinking...
(**sigh**this is hard **sigh**)
how nice it was at the times you were by my side...
Lately...
Lately-your smile dances in my mind and this soul rememers how your touches warmed him... And noone else has or came close to make him feel in the way you once adored him...
Lately-
Lately, the trees have been shaking away their bareness and the earth has once again taken it's fresh breath of life... We spent our times playin' here with OUR worlds so alive... But not-
Lately...
Baby, time goes on and I'm here without you lately...
And the colors here aren't as bright and the birds don't sound as nice without you
lately...
And Lately...
This comfortably numb...
has turned into lonely...
Yeah it felt good not hurting for someone;
but the want for that comfort you gave me
has been growing...
Lately...


Very, very nice... I like this piece...

Props...

Enlil
10-01-06, 08:51 PM
Thank you for checkin out my work. It's always great to get feedback from you.

Abs_inth da prophet
10-17-06, 12:35 AM
this is very nice..

real poetry..

more people should check this out so...

BOOOST!

Irish-dipstick
10-17-06, 05:53 AM
yep felt most def i was feeling this way the other day but not as much now but i know whats trvaleing thru ur mind keep it tight

Nasty Manny
10-18-06, 01:21 AM
that was a nice peice ok up tha work