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sexydeltagirl
08-09-06, 04:54 PM
I'm crisper than a 100 dollar bill...
Fresher than clean linen...
Sometimes I amaze my self everytime I grab a pen..
I'll give it to you straight with no chaser...
You might not like what I say but you gotta respect my gangsta...
And even when I spit venom I'm smile and wink at you...
I use to wear my heart on my sleeve and some folks took advantage...
And when they though I was gonna spit hatred back at them..
But instead greeted them with laughter...
It made them get even mad-er....
Cause I'm content with my life...
I'm happy with my situation...
I laugh in the face of adversity and keep on steppin...
Cause he told me he's blessed to be in my presence...
At first I thought he was lying but when he smiled there was no denying it...
I make him happy...
So while folks try to come and destory this castle of happiness I've built...
There are going to need more than sharp words of belittlement...
I'm fresher than ever...
I more than okay...
I'm so much better....

Irish-dipstick
08-09-06, 05:24 PM
I'm crisper than a 100 dollar bill...
Fresher than clean linen...
Sometimes I amaze my self everytime I grab a pen..
I'll give it to you straight with no chaser...
You might not like what I say but you gotta respect my gangsta...
And even when I spit venom I'm smile and wink at you...
I use to wear my heart on my sleeve and some folks took advantage...
And when they though I was gonna spit hatred back at them..
It made them get even mad-er....
Cause I'm content with my life...
I'm happy with my sitiuation...
I laugh in the face of adversity and keep on steppin...
Cause he told me he's blesed to be in my presence...
At first I thought he was lying but when he smiled there was no denying it...
I make him happy...
So while folks try to come and destory this castle of happiness I've built...
There gonna need more than sharp words of belittlement...
I'm fresher than ever...
I more than okay...
I'm so much better....

a state of awareness yeah this is a good piece not really as deep into the mind as the rest i wasn't interested in this piece first to be honest but i checked back dam she got a few line that related to me like:

You might not like what I say but you gotta respect my gangsta...

and at the start where i said sate of awareness like i feel this poem on like im here and i aint going no place its like that Keep It Tight ma!!!

sexydeltagirl
08-09-06, 06:53 PM
a state of awareness yeah this is a good piece not really as deep into the mind as the rest i wasn't interested in this piece first to be honest but i checked back dam she got a few line that related to me like:
and at the start where i said sate of awareness like i feel this poem on like im here and i aint going no place its like that Keep It Tight ma!!!

lol, yeah it was a little something that came to me...nothing deep or anything...

Thanks for peeping it though....