its been a while....heres another

[byrdman84]

The struggle continues
Throughout any physical venue
I continue displaying what it is that I’ve been through
Times are hard, but my mind is smart so I still pursue
Destined greatness, ignore hatred because I know it will ensue
If time reveals what is truth…
And truth sets you free…
I’m truly free because that’s what God meant for me
Laws of man I’m not bound by…
Insurrection is what I live by…
Picket signs for speeding tickets
Wicked rhymes that seem exquisite
At night the sounds of crickets makes it hard for me to sleep
It seems as if I’m resting but my mind still creeps
To seek answers to my questions I quest…
My soul beckons and yet…
Control weapons that injure sinister silhouettes
No regrets,Life is like Russian roulette
You never know the outcome or which chamber holds the bullet
Pull the trigger and it’s too late to figure whether or not mistakes were made
The answer is apparent if you’re slain

well heres another piece by me... feedback will be appreciated:yes:


*thinks* I really need to write more:dry:

[Irish-dipstick]

The struggle continues
Throughout any physical venue
I continue displaying what it is that I’ve been through
Times are hard, but my mind is smart so I still pursue
Destined greatness, ignore hatred because I know it will ensue
If time reveals what is truth…
And truth sets you free…
I’m truly free because that’s what God meant for me
Laws of man I’m not bound by…
Insurrection is what I live by…
Picket signs for speeding tickets
Wicked rhymes that seem exquisite
At night the sounds of crickets makes it hard for me to sleep
It seems as if I’m resting but my mind still creeps
To seek answers to my questions I quest…
My soul beckons and yet…
Control weapons that injure sinister silhouettes
No regrets,Life is like Russian roulette
You never know the outcome or which chamber holds the bullet
Pull the trigger and it’s too late to figure whether or not mistakes were made
The answer is apparent if you’re slain
well heres another piece by me... feedback will be appreciated:yes:
*thinks* I really need to write more:dry:

yeah theres a real nice flow to this piece i can see clearly that ur stating u been going through trouble in ur life but i dunno is that related to u not been writing for a minute...i cant say but good piece non the less