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sexydeltagirl
08-04-06, 07:45 PM
Have you ever had that connection...
The kind that gets the blood rushing...
To your heart at lighting fast speed...
You feel a sorta calming like right before the storm ...
I've experienced this recently with a man that quite possibly...
Is trying to sweep me off my feet...
He did it way before he knew it...
He quite simply showed me some compassion...
In my time of trouble he stood by my side and didn't buckle...
He made sure I was safe and away from harm...
His arms braced me when my walk was unsteady...
This man digs me...
I told him about my journey and that I'm a little uneasy...
Opening up my heart again...
And I'm on an emotional rollercoaster cause the one I'm supposed...
To marry is....
Acting out of character...
So he said that he figured a woman with the vibe of a soul sista...
Wouldn't be without a possible suitor...
He said that I can be the pilot on this trip of uncertainty....
He laid all of his cards out for me...
Exposed some things that would have caused a young woman to blush...
But I just digested every letter, my questions didn't go unanswered...
So his ability to be honest is so sexy to me...
And as he looked into my eyes and with his left hand...
Glided softly through my permed tresses...
I started getting this feeling....
Like maybe I got drunk in Miami for a reason...
Maybe he is what I need in my life...
A life preserver....
Someone to wash away those who passed over...
And left a sour taste in my mouth...
So as I swallowed his sweetness...
In words not so complex...
Like woman, and Miss Tee....
Understanding my need to be addressed as an equal...
No more baby's or sweethearts for me...
So before I get all excited about this new found abundance of tingling sensations...
I'll come into this "something new"...
Knowing that from the very beginning...
He was less of a stranger...
And more of a friend....

Irish-dipstick
08-05-06, 08:11 AM
Have you ever had that connection...
The kind that gets the blood rushing...
To your heart at lighting fast speed...
You feel a sorta calming like right before the storm ...
I've experienced this recently with a man that quite possibly...
Is trying to sweep me off my feet...
He did it way before he knew it...
He quite simply showed me some compassion...
In my time of trouble he stood by my side and didn't buckle...
He made sure I was safe and away from harm...
His arms braced me when my walk was unsteady...
This man digs me...
I told him about my journey and that I'm a little uneasy...
Opening up my heart again...
And I'm on an emotional rollercoaster cause the one I'm supposed...
To marry is....
Acting out of character...
So he said that he figured a woman with the vibe of a soul sista...
Wouldn't be without a possible suitor...
He said that I can be the pilot on this trip of uncertainty....
He laid all of his cards out for me...
Exposed some things that would have caused a young woman to blush...
But I just digested every letter, my questions didn't go unanswered...
So his ability to be honest is so sexy to me...
And as he looked into my eyes and with his left hand...
Glided softly through my permed tresses...
I started getting this feeling....
Like maybe I got drunk in Miami for a reason...
Maybe he is what I need in my life...
A life preserver....
Someone to wash away those who passed over...
And left a sour taste in my mouth...
So as I swallowed his sweetness...
In words not so complex...
Like woman, and Miss Tee....
Understanding my need to be addressed as an equal...
No more baby's or sweethearts for me...
So before I get all excited about this new found abundance of tingling sensations...
I'll come into this "something new"...
Knowing that from the very beginning...
He was less of a stranger...
And more of a friend....


yeah thats real nice i like it reading it love and compasionate piece i feel right here, the bit in bold is the bit i felt came off best for me plus i think that it explains alot to about the story ur trying to get across