The conclusion (relationship life)

[Irish-dipstick]

*two shots hit the wall*

man i could do it i could kill my kid
man but im sick cause i wanted to
but my head filled with bad sh1t
maybe its best if i do a runner though
cause then the kid can grow
while i remain getting older
sh1t atleast the kid would be safe
cause im going fcuking crazy
atleast he'd be away from my land of strafe (thatz gun fire)
but u cant blame me blame the bastard who made me
cause they ones that got me nearly killing my baby
and i aint even got a bit to eat
and im just mad cause i aint got no sleep
and the fcuking bottom line is i aint fcuked for weeks
cause ur mama wasn't feeling well
and she had weak ass checks
and quess who from i dont even know if im ur daddy
but i didnt care at the time
i look after you glady
i let you grow and i let u shine
cause i need to leave in fear of raising u bably

*points the gun at his wife*

but you dont give a fcuk whether i go
cause i bought ya ass
homey told me you was a hoe
dam but i didnt listen
i didnt pay any attention
thats one of the reasons now im fcuking stressing
i could of done something stupid and blown u both
but i could that kid is me
but your nothing so i must say good bye
cause i aint ready for this family
and u and the kid aint ready to die
but atleast wat u can do is remind im daddy


.....dam!!!!

*packs clothes*

*door slams shut*

[Irish-dipstick]

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[homeyjay]

*two shots hit the wall*
man i could do it i could kill my kid
man but im sick cause i wanted to
but my head filled with bad sh1t
maybe its best if i do a runner though
cause then the kid can grow
while i remain getting older
sh1t atleast the kid would be safe
cause im going fcuking crazy
atleast he'd be away from my land of strafe (thatz gun fire)
but u cant blame me blame the bastard who made me
cause they ones that got me nearly killing my baby
and i aint even got a bit to eat
and im just mad cause i aint got no sleep
and the fcuking bottom line is i aint fcuked for weeks
cause ur mama wasn't feeling well
and she had weak ass checks
and quess who from i dont even know if im ur daddy
but i didnt care at the time
i look after you glady
i let you grow and i let u shine
cause i need to leave in fear of raising u bably
*points the gun at his wife*
but you dont give a fcuk whether i go
cause i bought ya ass
homey told me you was a hoe
dam but i didnt listen
i didnt pay any attention
thats one of the reasons now im fcuking stressing
i could of done something stupid and blown u both
but i could that kid is me
but your nothing so i must say good bye
cause i aint ready for this family
and u and the kid aint ready to die
but atleast wat u can do is remind im daddy
.....dam!!!!
*packs clothes*
*door slams shut*
Damn I.D. - I had to reread this piece several times because of the twists and turns, It's like dude is stressing because of war and poverty, and then to top it off with raising a family with the kid being a mystery that's a load and a half. At first i couldn't understand the gun play but after the rereads I understood the situation. Kind of reminded me of the movie the crow with it's darkness yet diced with a bit of morality. Will there be a part three and will dude bring a happy ending to it all?, way to branch out. "keep on keeping on".

[Irish-dipstick]

Damn I.D. - I had to reread this piece several times because of the twists and turns, It's like dude is stressing because of war and poverty, and then to top it off with raising a family with the kid being a mystery that's a load and a half. At first i couldn't understand the gun play but after the rereads I understood the situation. Kind of reminded me of the movie the crow with it's darkness yet diced with a bit of morality. Will there be a part three and will dude bring a happy ending to it all?, way to branch out. "keep on keeping on".

man ders been four parts circle back homey am one day was the first part beginning u no of the relationship, long nights is part 2 its the compassion and love and sh1t and part 3 is late nights where he trips and bugs out then there this it says the conclusion but im bringing another twist to the table keep it locked and peep the next one its dropping later today