Untitled...The Open Door

[sexydeltagirl]

I'll knock gently on the door that keeps your heart guarded...
I'll allow you some time to feel comfortable enough to look out the...
Peep hole...
I'll stand outside for a little while you get your place in order..
Allow you to let go of past loves and hurt emotions...
Bad feelings that linger when you hear her name spoken...
I'll wait while you read me....
Question my reasons for knocking and not running for cover...
When you told me...
She hurt you....
Left your house a mess...
The exterior of your door was beautifully decorated...
But now I'm getting a little closer to entry...
Getting you to expose those feelings..
The ones that appear after nights of sharing...
Long conversations on the phone...
Long walks in the park...
Long kisses that leave imprints on daydreams...
Before you know it...
You'll crack your door for me..
And allow me to slowly walk into your heart...
I'll take my time and walk lightly...
Remembering that...
Your heart was once made of stone....

[Irish-dipstick]

I'll knock gently on the door that keeps your heart guarded...
I'll allow you some time to feel comfortable enough to look out the...
Peep hole...
I'll stand outside for a little while you get your place in order..
Allow you to let go of past loves and hurt emotions...
Bad feelings that linger when you hear her name spoken...
I'll wait while you read me....
Question my reasons for knocking and not running for cover...
When you told me...
She hurt you....
Left your house a mess...
The exterior of your door was beautifully decorated...
But now I'm getting a little closer to entry...
Getting you to expose those feelings..
The ones that appear after nights of sharing...
Long conversations on the phone...
Long walks in the park...
Long kisses that leave imprints on daydreams...
Before you know it...
You'll crack your door for me..
And allow me to slowly walk into your heart...
I'll take my time and walk lightly...
Remembering that...
Your heart was once made of stone....

thats a gooding right der i can relate to this because i actually done this to a person by rejecting and rejecting and she was my love dammit and that is the basics of my poetry thatz why im feeling this so hold heartly but i believe the time has come to on....:yes:

this is a real piece nice one

[ovb81]

Great piece as usual however.. and i know im late..but why is every piece titled "Untitled"? just asking..be easy sweetie

[sexydeltagirl]

Great piece as usual however.. and i know im late..but why is every piece titled "Untitled"? just asking..be easy sweetie


lol, yeah in the beginning...I don't have a title but one I read over it...I usually come up with something that sorta describe what I wrote...Sometimes I can't think of anything and leave them untitled...