If Only

[homeyjay]

in the arms of the wave
I am rocked like a babe
tranquil is how I dwell
as I am channeled away
the sound of your voice
seems to stifle the noise
ill disposition is kaput
no longer is there a void
I'm inundated by altitude
though the ground's afoot
when you come into view
you're my first school day
first drive on the expressway
I'm nervous but I am not scared
comfort comes from somewhere
of you I am dreaming
I'm addicted and feinding
your presence is reknowned
oh for the courage to tell you
of my true feelings,to yell to
the world that i love this girl
that they would see and believe
like me that we were meant to be
yet why can't i ramble on to you?
like i ramble when i pretend to
don't you feel the love i have for you?
my heart is pounding so don't you hear it too?
why did i say something?
yeah too much pop isn't good for you
if...

[sexydeltagirl]

in the arms of the wave
I am rocked like a babe
tranquil is how I dwell
as I am channeled away
the sound of your voice
seems to stifle the noise
ill disposition is kaput
no longer is there a void
I'm inundated by altitude
though the ground's afoot
when you come into view
you're my first school day
first drive on the expressway
I'm nervous but I am not scared
confront comes from somewhere
of you I am dreaming
I'm addicted and feinding
your presence is reknowned
oh for the courage to tell you
of my true feelings,to yell to
the world that i love this girl
that they would see and believe
like me that we were meant to be
yet why can't i ramble on to you?
like i ramble when i pretend to
don't you feel the love i have for you?
my heart is pounding so don't you hear it too?
why did i say something?
yeah too much pop isn't good for you
if...

Wow, this is beautiful...So many words came to mind when I read this joint...I'll be back...

But this is very dope...Your word play is so smooth....:blush:

[Irish-dipstick]

homey this real nice i like this......


the sound of your voice
seems to stifle the noise
ill disposition is kaput
no longer is there a void

^^^^^^^^^^^
thatz dope

of you I am dreaming
I'm addicted and feinding
your presence is reknowned
oh for the courage to tell you
of my true feelings,to yell to

^^^^^^^^^^^^
real nice

great over all homey peace

[homeyjay]

aaahh schucks! I appreciate the love y'all especially coming from two of my favorite main stays here at the p.c.. Thanks! and a big ups to ya.

[slave2aplaya]

Feeling your flow and way with words, always do.
Really liked that one, easing me back into poetry nicely.
Missed it, missed u guys!
Keep em coming
Peace
xXx

[homeyjay]

Feeling your flow and way with words, always do.
Really liked that one, easing me back into poetry nicely.
Missed it, missed u guys!
Keep em coming
Peace
xXx
Thanks STP - as always it is good to hear from you, I am not even going to ask how is it going, just hope that you're well and hanging in there. You know reading can be somewhat theraputic and writing can be like finding a four leaf clover need I say more. Come back when you are ready and bless us with your flow, hey writing is in our blood, an ain't nothin' wrong with takin' a little break to regenerate. Appreciate you peepin' and speakin' and believe me when I say this you are missed too. L8TR hj