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sexydeltagirl
07-04-06, 01:03 PM
Several years have elapsed...
And I'm thinking about the past....
When the love was fresh like fields...
Of freshly cut grass....
And I think to myself...
Should I let go...
Turn my back on those sweet memories...
That dwindle in my mind as I sleep...
I longed for you from the first moment...
I laid my eyes upon you.....
You were all that I could have imagined....
And more..
We started as friends....
And gradually added "the benefits".....
We had a code of respect that was never spoken aloud....
You didn't talk about other lovers....
We didn't bring them around...
But now I've found someone...
Who wants to showcase his love for me...
Take me away from where the streets are dirty...
And lay my body down on the beaches of serenity...
I was hoping you would be happy for me...
But you are the opposite...
Throwing tantrams and trying to cause drama...
I've never seen this side of you...
The side that would try to put it's hands on me....
In your attempts to shake some sense in me...
But I like this man...
I'm falling in love with this man....
And as much as I want you to be happy for me...
Be that shoulder to lean on...
Just like how you used mine with Renea'....
You insist on being bitter...
Insist on being uncivil...
So I'll turn my back on this...
And I promise I'll never look back...
So as I plead with you this one last time....
Please don't put me...
In a no win situation.....

Irish-dipstick
07-04-06, 01:52 PM
Several years have elapsed...
And I'm thinking about the past....
When the love was fresh like fields...
Of freshly cut grass....

^^^
i like that

We started as friends....
And gradually added "the benefits".....
We had a code of respect that was never spoken aloud....
You didn't talk about other lovers....
We didn't bring them around...

^^^^
great lines making the story here

i really feel this piece as i gradually went through it i realised that it got deeper the start broke me into it with the typical love setting with the fields and grass in my mind then slowly dipping me into the love and then finally giving me the downfall of mistrust in a relationship yes for real i love this piece very deep (K.I.M)