PDA

View Full Version : For my favorite little girl


persia
06-28-06, 11:53 PM
If you only knew I loved you before I had knowledge of what love was
I met you and was willing to do anything for you just because
It makes you happy
The first time I saw your face I knew that anything in this world I could give
You would have, know, touch, see and feel as long as in your world I was able to live
It makes you happy
Your smile made my whole world change in ways I never new existed
You brought a new kind of sunshine into my life before I even knew I was missing it
It makes you happy
The innocence that your face carries and the zeal for life in your laugh shows me
That this world has so much potential, and I see it in you at only three
It makes you happy
I look at you and see all that love is and ever will be and that I hope will one day
Live in my own home, when my own children laugh and play
It makes you happy
The hugs you run at full speed to give me without fail every time you hear my name
Let me know that since you came into my life, it has never been the same
It makes you happy
Little girl, you have brought a light into my life I was scared would never live here
Taken the confusion that once existed and made what was important clear
It makes you happy
If you only knew I loved you before I had knowledge of what love was
I met you and was willing to do anything for you just because
It makes you happy

sexydeltagirl
06-29-06, 02:13 AM
Very nice....this piece is really what I was feeling when I first laid eyes on my niece...she was so helpless yet so strong...

Dopeness...

homeyjay
06-29-06, 10:53 AM
If you only knew I loved you before I had knowledge of what love was
I met you and was willing to do anything for you just because
It makes you happy
The first time I saw your face I knew that anything in this world I could give
You would have, know, touch, see and feel as long as in your world I was able to live
It makes you happy
Your smile made my whole world change in ways I never new existed
You brought a new kind of sunshine into my life before I even knew I was missing it
It makes you happy
The innocence that your face carries and the zeal for life in your laugh shows me
That this world has so much potential, and I see it in you at only three
It makes you happy
I look at you and see all that love is and ever will be and that I hope will one day
Live in my own home, when my own children laugh and play
It makes you happy
The hugs you run at full speed to give me without fail every time you hear my name
Let me know that since you came into my life, it has never been the same
It makes you happy
Little girl, you have brought a light into my life I was scared would never live here
Taken the confusion that once existed and made what was important clear
It makes you happy
If you only knew I loved you before I had knowledge of what love was
I met you and was willing to do anything for you just because
It makes you happy

Great piece, you can tell that this one came straight from the heart. Those are always the best ones too, big ups to ya'.

Irish-dipstick
06-29-06, 11:58 AM
yeah for real nice peace touched me in a way that i now understand i really like the opening lines


If you only knew I loved you before I had knowledge of what love was
I met you and was willing to do anything for you just because
It makes you happy

^^^
yeah thatz it! good piece

persia
06-29-06, 06:40 PM
thanks for the feedback! i was beginning to think people didnt comment in here lol

Nadira...Rare
06-29-06, 07:03 PM
loved it... Na loves da kids