PDA

View Full Version : **My Second Wind**


Absolut da poet
06-26-06, 02:10 AM
...
thoughts of your pure essence flow through the ridges of my mind
streams of your effervescence sets fire to my senses..
sets ease to my stresses of not being blessed by your presence it's...
a necessity for me to invest in...
submerging myself in you...
consider me selfish..my desire for you supplants all else I do..
far from superficial my love is true though it manifests itself in the physical
staring at you subliminal messages pass through...
can you hear me ..
when the light reflects the brown of your hypnotic eyes
beautiful as crimson tide..
washing up on the shores of my mind and I'm lost inside
casting fear aside and setting sail on your love I'm paralysed by your smile
and I've gone too far to turn back now...
I weather the storms and the journey goes on...
to undiscovered countries abroad...
the promised land we're destined to cross..
and I've known all along this is where I belong...
even when it looked sooo wrong...
even when I felt love had gone and tried to move on
our love was too great and the gravity brought me back to my home
the birthplace of my soul...
the only home I've known where my roots grow strong and my seeds are sown
so connected to you that your blood be my own...
that we share the same kin in the same skin that was once our own...
your love be my second wind....
...inside...
....
my soul's white by combinations of colors in your light and..
now you see I'm a prisom of beauty by your sight
so please don't blink me into a prison of eternal night
locked in an attrition of love I can't fight...suspicion and innuendos
when anger crescendoes I'm hiding my heart tryin to avoid the blows..
cause if you leave lord knows
I'll be flesh cold in this death pose
pressed by the woes cleft to my chest...clothed...
..in my best.......black...
I'm praying the lord is sayin he'll....take me back
halfway I'll be falling from grace if you don't stay and don't say..
I do..
hell....I'll be lost in space..
I love you
and it's written across my face like every word from this page...
chasten
an idea...that you can hear...how I feel when you're not near
cause sometimes I feel that you don't care
are you listening ?
sometimes I feel that you're not there....and that's when I drift
like the P.M.....dawn's from rift of memory...bliss...
and baby you send me
on days that we don't kiss..it's...like..
it's like a rose on the grave
it's sealed my eternal sadness like you won't save....my life..
so take the **W and be my wife so I can breathe again..
so let me catch my second wind...cause you're all I'm living for anymore
so let me breathe again...let me catch my second wind..


**my last name begins with the letter " W "

sexydeltagirl
06-26-06, 08:19 AM
This is very beautiful...I had to read it a few times just to let it soak in...Your work always leave me full...

Dopeness....

Irish-dipstick
06-26-06, 08:20 AM
for real woooo! boy that was a good read long as hell though but nice piece for real kept my attention the whole way through....



on days that we don't kiss..it's...like..
it's like a rose on the grave
it's sealed my eternal sadness like you won't save....my life..
so take the **W and be my wife so I can breathe again..
so let me catch my second wind...cause you're all I'm living for anymore
so let me breathe again...let me catch my second wind..

^^^^
i like that

homeyjay
06-26-06, 11:13 AM
AYO Abs, I see that you've struck again, when it comes to your work you be "down in the jungle deep" which is a compliment to the depthness of your pieces of which i have to double read, but i have to both laugh and agreed with I.D. it was long as hell but worth every line felt, hj

Nadira...Rare
06-26-06, 03:43 PM
Beauty