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Mahatma
06-25-06, 04:25 PM
''Angel with a face to match'' {MA}

I've no interest in these pseudo-nymphomaniacs
claiming porn-star status but end up just laying back
Mahatma/Mad hatter; it's a pseudonym for maniac
he'd only talk third person if it truly relayed the math
There's no need for two strangers with amazing ass
my heart's racing fast from one angel with a face to match
A saintly gasp, a bitten lip and a shaven path
to the place we wrap hands, grip and escape the map
From this playful act she shakes, contracts
and takes my grasp as we exchange the last
Loving looks of passion in plain contrast
to a girl who says she's great but has a blatant lack
Of ability to engage, perhaps can't sustain the pace
or she's afraid intimate action might fade her mask
That's why I have to lay adjacent to an angel
she never says she's great but satiates like a rainbow.

Xtrovextol
06-25-06, 05:31 PM
That was hot with a couple extra t's on the end, smooth as silk flow, I embraced the last two lines the most because of the rhythm in the words

sexydeltagirl
06-25-06, 06:54 PM
I really liked this piece....dopeness!

yaga
06-26-06, 12:22 AM
That was hot with a couple extra t's on the end, smooth as silk flow, I embraced the last two lines the most because of the rhythm in the words

Basically.

The flow, though... i'm really getting that flow, duke. Silk indeed.

"A saintly gasp, a bitten lip and a shaven path
to the place we wrap hands, grip and escape the map"

- "escape the map" is echoing for me right now, man.

Quality. Thanx for dropping.

Advent Verbal Kent
06-27-06, 11:14 PM
Not to shabby...Your words remind me of myself from back in the day.


AvK

W.I.Z.E.
06-27-06, 11:18 PM
Not to shabby...Your words remind me of myself from back in the day.
AvK

Wut up clown...good isht Mahtma...flow was good and content was mos def on point. Fully c/s Yaga's quote.