I need a reader.

[Innkyblott]

I have this short story and I want to know if it will appeal to this audience. I need one or two people to read it for me. It's just a draft, so it's far from perfect and the words don't flow yet, but I want to know if the story is good and easy to follow.


First come first serve.

[k-mom]

i'll read it.


i wrote a bit of a story once, but never could get it just right so i gave it up. anyways i will read your story.

[pl2584]

post it or send it i will read it.

[k-mom]

post it or send it i will read it.


he sent it to me but i cant read it because i dont have ms office.


:( but im trying.