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Barney Rubble
06-08-06, 12:18 AM
people have no clue like the average juror/
world endin soon bush lookin like the next furer/
worldwide holocaust in the works/
muslim, christian whatever we all decompose the same in the dirt/
men remain boys mesmerized by the skirt/
women lost they soul consumed by their commercial worth/
all while the media thrives off of mass confusion/
our attention spans shortened like lit fuses/
knowledge been abandoned since the internet's inclusion/
as well as the air now our minds are polluted/
and seclusion breeds less movement/
inclusion creates exclusion/
racism still remains it's just been diluted/
god damn what's the solution/
how about once in awhile we pick up a book/
or learn the moves of a rook/
instead children born fully grown forced to fend for self/
even if we were all rich happiness takes more than wealth/
we must gain or atleast strive for knowledge of self/
we dont need god to tell us what's right from wrong/
we know, we're just too lazy to be strong/
together as one is where we belong/
but what do you care you just bop your head to the song/

#1rapper
06-09-06, 06:44 PM
rhymes seemed kinda simple, and the flow was basic, that aiigh though cuz its ur first time here and ive yet to see anyone be nice as hell on their first drop here, id like to see some more though