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the Nut
05-31-06, 09:02 PM
rapper 1

after all this time u finally get ur -re-match-
u can say ish like how ur gona let ur -Heat Clap-/
but I know uv used time to pre-write ur verse to sound "Ill",
ur more pre-written than the drafts of books from doctor Phil/
il giv ya credit tho : ur one stubborn -stain to remove-,
all that ish-talkin is just getin in my boxers n -Makin em Loose-/
but we'll travel down that yellow-brick -conversation afterwards-,
for now just click ya heels twice n say "i -Wana-make-a path-towards-
wherever im headed coz im -about to lose-",
say it 3 times n it will surely get ya -House to Move-/
but dont forget, Dorothy, an idea is a vehicle for -change-,
so act like ideas in motion n -make- ur -escape- to far, far -away-/
i have to start killing u like ur an iraqi -pri-so-ner-,
but unlike bush's, this info wont go national, so -giv-it-up-/
ur rhymes r so green its harmful to the -eyes-, *
but practice makes perfect,one's -life- can only begin 2 -rise-/
little rain cloud u can storm all u like but u cant ruin -my picnic-,
but when my UV-Rays come out u need to move -like Quick-Sticks-/**
until now iv caged my skill inside so the metaphors -build up-,
and when u cage this beast,the beast only wants to -Kill Stuff-/
dont be such an airhead, ur thoughts r -Lofting-,
n ur rap skill is so bad i can smell ur -Droppings-/

rapper 2

this kid acts like he belongs in the third grade,
his hairs so nappy like something the birds made/ (a nest)
ill do you Dahmer style, eat your whole heart out,
your flow stinks when you rap you spit farts out/
you battled me and beat me, once cause i gave up,
but face it, me leaving here? ish,get your weight up!/
youll get face-chopped, ill "Nut" in your mouth and call it a "facial"
since im white, and you pretend to be black, we'll call it.. interacial/
save your peso`s, cant believe you agreed to re-act this,
i thought you practiced, your still sloppy as a pissy mattress/

rapper 1 or rapper 2? thanks yall

Child Proof
05-31-06, 11:09 PM
Rapper 2 took this...#1 was garbage...sorta like my battle...return the favor and go vote on it.

#1rapper
06-01-06, 03:14 PM
....this is pure example of a child catching feelings after geetin murked in a battle...u got a lot of growing up to do

JonMen
06-01-06, 04:02 PM
proof i'll say 100%


#1 ill say 110%

although it's very very close, #1 took it

Child Proof
06-01-06, 07:19 PM
proof i'll say 100%
#1 ill say 110%
although it's very very close, #1 took it

:huh: which battle are you voting on son? I didn't participate in this one...I just voted on it. I'm just curious, cuz you wrote Proof & #1.

Child Proof
06-01-06, 07:21 PM
....this is pure example of a child catching feelings after geetin murked in a battle...u got a lot of growing up to do


:laugh: fukk you talkin about?

JonMen
06-01-06, 10:41 PM
sh1t sorry man made a mistake

the Nut
06-01-06, 11:31 PM
nah this is my battle, and i just want a different websites opinion. i think ol boy was just dickriding on you proof, he knows number one didnt have ****. all them dashes and **** makes it look compounded to an idiot but that whole rhyme was wack. he wrote that **** in like ten hours, i wrote my garbage in 5 minutes and showed him up.. lol

JonMen
06-02-06, 12:56 AM
LO cool man

David Lama
06-06-06, 07:38 PM
number 2 got it, better wording and punches