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sexydeltagirl
05-29-06, 04:18 PM
I've scored a home run with this one...
He's sorta like fiction...
The MAN he is....
Is what my girlfriends wish they had...
They laugh and say girl....
He's truly a rare one...
He can at the right time....
Cause for a second I doubted that I'd find a good one...
Kissing frogs trying to find my Prince....
Contacting past loves to see if they have changed....
But he came so naturally to me...
Just making eye contact....
Trying to make it across the street...
It felt like the attraction was stronger than a magnet...
The force between us kinda like magic...
I'm on a high speed romance....
I'm smilling and I'm dancing...
With him right beside me...
Taking me higher....
Helping me aspire...
To greater things...
I was just crossing the street...
And found my other half...
My missing link...
Some call it fate...
I call it a blessing....

Absolut da poet
05-30-06, 03:44 AM
I've scored a home run with this one..
she's a.. beautiful ebony inscription..
painted in the raise..
she is.. something like the breeze...
capturing the ways..I breathe..
with passion..
She is.. truely a rare one..
wearing a glass slipper..
holding an apple..
like a fantasy but she came to me so naturally...
.....
....
....
I crossed the street to meet her..
figured I'd say "Hello...it's me..uh.."
"I see you everyday but I never speak.."
Next thing I know..I'm on a high speed romance..
I'm laughing..and catching her right here beside me..
at last..
I'm feelin I've found my other half..
my missing link..
some call it a blessing...
I call it fate.

*peep sig.*

sexydeltagirl
05-30-06, 10:58 AM
I've scored a home run with this one..
she's a.. beautiful ebony inscription..
painted in the raise..
she is.. something like the breeze...
capturing the ways..I breathe..
with passion..
She is.. truely a rare one..
wearing a glass slipper..
holding an apple..
like a fantasy but she came to me so naturally...
.....
....
....
I crossed the street to meet her..
figured I'd say "Hello...it's me..uh.."
"I see you everyday but I never speak.."
Next thing I know..I'm on a high speed romance..
I'm laughing..and catching her right here beside me..
at last..
I'm feelin I've found my other half..
my missing link..
some call it a blessing...
I call it fate.
*peep sig.*

WoW...that was so dope....I was going to come back and write from another perspective but you hit it right on the head....saying all the things I wanted to say and more.....

This joint inspired the one below....thanks

Dopeness....:blush:

sexydeltagirl
05-30-06, 11:07 AM
So I told my family about her...
Check this out...
I told my Momma I think I found the one...
That could possibly bless me with her grandchildren...
My Momma laughed but I'm serious....
She's what a woman is supposed to be....
So fragile on the outside...
But with the heart of lion...
And the determination of a fighter....
She's my lady...
And I say this with no delay...
Because of the way she walks....
Her head up high....
Her hips slightly twisting...
I see other men looking....
And smile to myself...
Damn I'm lucky...
I sometimes wish I had roses to put at her feet...
She's my Queen....
When I'm with her....
I have to catch my breath...
Take a deep exhale and let go of her scent...
Just for a minute....
I take a deep inhale...
And it fills my lungs again...
I don't know how I walked this earth without that scent...
Who would have thought that just crossing the street..
I would connect eyes with someone I was longing for....
Tired of chasing love and misery chasing me..
I hit a home run with this one...
I'm not getting off this high speed romance...
My heart told me she might be the one....
So on our date in the park...
When the stars were shining up above..
Beaming the light that cascaded from her necklace...
I placed my finger to her lips...
While my eyes told her to remain silent...
And with my lips I told her that I needed her...
At this very moment...
And forever more....

Absolut da poet
05-30-06, 02:49 PM
hot...:yes:

I figured instead of just coming in and sayin "yeah this is nice yada, yada..." I'd show that I really like it by throwin something on it..

I like your style...it's very open and refreshing..

a great source of inspiration..keep doing whatchu do..

*muah*

sexydeltagirl
05-30-06, 03:38 PM
hot...:yes:
I figured instead of just coming in and sayin "yeah this is nice yada, yada..." I'd show that I really like it by throwin something on it..
I like your style...it's very open and refreshing..
a great source of inspiration..keep doing whatchu do..
*muah*

:blush: Thanks I appreciate you dropping some lines....You know I am a fan of your work as well...

I'll def. keep writing...it's a part of me now...

*muah* right back at cha....