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Nadira...Rare
05-28-06, 03:33 PM
I fantasize about you everyday
Feeling the need to be close to you
I just want to see my shining star
Standing tall, beautiful brown skin...
I'm taken with you
Suffocating on the fresh smell of love again
I feel alive again
I feel his flow
He is an intoxicating being
With the aura of a King
I just want to see my love again
He is everything I dreamed of...
And I listened
Heard his verse as he spoke
Each syllable as it crashed with the beat of the drum machine
Standing there so full of potential
I smile
He nods in acknowledgement
You are an amazing being... I feel your flow
Commanding the crowd, Moving the cipher
Is it me you are talking about?
5'9", chinky eyes and, thick thighs
It's me... concentrate on me
I know who you are
You are much better than this
Speak intelligently over this beat
I can see who you are even when you can't
There is much more required of you
Teach..
Speak...
Teach...
I just want to see my love again
I fantasize about you everyday needing, needing to be close to you.

sexydeltagirl
05-29-06, 12:36 PM
Very nice piece Miss, I can identify with this .....it inspired this piece...

Untitled...

We are growing old together...
For each second I'm in your presense....
The clock is ticking and I'm quickly...
Getting closer to my death with you...
As my body changes the remnants of my teenage years...
Pass me by....
I'm becoming a woman with you...
I love the Man you are....
And will adore Man you want to become...
Knowing that I will bear witness to one of Gods most precious gift...
The making of our family...
You say stand with me and not sway...
And if your mind wonders know that home is always where the heart is...
So I remain focused on our mission...
For tomorrow is not promised...
We are living for the future...
Hoping to complete the transition...
To our new Beginning....

Nadira...Rare
05-30-06, 07:09 PM
I'm becoming a woman with you...
I love the Man you are....
And will adore Man you want to become..
I loved that part... thank you for letting me inspire a piece from you SD... your writing always hits da spot when i'm down

sexydeltagirl
05-30-06, 08:08 PM
I'm becoming a woman with you...
I love the Man you are....
And will adore Man you want to become..
I loved that part... thank you for letting me inspire a piece from you SD... your writing always hits da spot when i'm down

Aww, no problem girlie...I read your new piece about not being able to be friends with someone and I know I made the right decision....

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