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Walt Frazier
05-24-06, 02:03 PM
in my soul I feel a hole
so out of control
why can't I be whole?
who will cajole
dog to eat from bowl;
man to eat buttered roll?
my soul
my soul
my soul

rigmarole

what do you think?

Irish-dipstick
05-24-06, 04:03 PM
im think why put a subject like world peace and love an sh1t when you are not talking bout it unless u love the dogg eating out of the bowl....:laugh:

my bad...itz cool though

Conduit
05-24-06, 04:14 PM
in my soul I feel a hole
so out of control
why can't I be whole?
who will cajole
dog to eat from bowl;
man to eat buttered roll?
my soul
my soul
my soul
rigmarole
what do you think?

classic.

Walt Frazier
05-24-06, 04:15 PM
:laugh:
ONE STAR!

:sad:

one star?
from afar
you look like tar
is that 'cism?
life is a prism.

<9-milli>
05-24-06, 04:16 PM
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

~quiet storm~
05-24-06, 04:16 PM
:laugh:

I don't know whether to give this 5 stars or 1. But you made me laugh, so I guess that's gotta count for something.

Walt Frazier
05-24-06, 04:16 PM
classic.
Thanks!

Xplicit Lyric™
05-24-06, 04:44 PM
:laugh:

MZ. VIXEN
05-24-06, 05:25 PM
sounds like a broke ass nicca's version of Haiku...

funny though....very funny:yes: