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slave2aplaya
05-16-06, 03:24 PM
...its freezing out here
in the cold
where you've left me
Im failing us both
if this was
sent here to test me
you've broken me down
Im confessing
its distressing
when Im just trying to teach you
so close, yet so far
Im still crying to reach you
when you're peaceful
I hate you
for not hurting like me
thought Im trying
I cant sate you
its disconcerting...you fight me
when...your reception's frosty
you've already lost me
before we have even begun
making me feel like a fool
for thinking you could be the one...

*Lets fix this baby, Ive never loved anyone the way I love you*
[Freestyle]

Irish-dipstick
05-16-06, 03:44 PM
nice piece...not many people been dropping the love side of things apart from SDG but we know how u do and how she do....

homeyjay
05-17-06, 12:37 PM
...its freezing out here
in the cold
where you've left me
Im failing us both
if this was
sent here to test me
you've broken me down
Im confessing
its distressing
when Im just trying to teach you
so close, yet so far
Im still crying to reach you
when you're peaceful
I hate you
for not hurting like me
thought Im trying
I cant sate you
its disconcerting...you fight me
when...your reception's frosty
you've already lost me
before we have even begun
making me feel like a fool
for thinking you could be the one...

*Lets fix this baby, Ive never loved anyone the way I love you*
[Freestyle]

Way to go STP - a Sister dug deep for this one, I feel the pain and vulnerability in this piece, "stay on the scene".