C.E.O to the R.O.C ^ "FRESH OUT THE FIRE PAN"!!!!

[JonMen]

Through The Wire lyrical remix
Read carefully cause i mixed it on audio and it sounds different when readin' it without the beat
the last part need some help, but i'm workin' on it

Ye the best ye touchin' the sky
am talkin bout Chi Town
the reason why
am persuin' these rhymes
with all the beatin's and binds
mama toonin' these grinds
less pay more gray she gets
pains my mind

my backround for the riches is seneless
most a them grown kids there ears' on Kanye West
this, more ghetto girls with powder puff chest
one of hip hop's finest
till 24 mine is
waitin' for Jay to say sign this
this music got me high got me drunk
taste buds wanna taste some
imagin' me singin' sh*t like crunk
livin' on the avenue of soul n' hip hop, feelin' homesome
ready for the world but some people hate
but still, they can't hold me back from faith
what's next for the next day
my cousin got a voice so she wanna be next day
had a hip hop x-ray
bring all the juice i'm a drink some, wednesday
till life supports myself, got enough wisdom
my soul's to God so he's left with this one

[Conduit]

not feeling this one... and what is "homesome"? Whats with you and the Roc?

[Irish-dipstick]

Whats with you and the Roc?


im just wonderin did they sign duke or not you been in posting in the poetry corner also....dam get of jay's d1ck

[JonMen]

im just wonderin did they sign duke or not you been in posting in the poetry corner also....dam get of jay's d1ck
homesome means feellin' good at home, relaxed yuh ain't wanna leave and yeah am a R.O.C fan, a tried the poetry forum just tuh get some feedback and don't be talkin **** about me bein on jay's **** ***** don't ****in' say **** like that, am just musically inspired buy kanye, common an Jay so don't come around me sayin' bull****, don't act like you ain't got a favourite rapper.

[Irish-dipstick]

homesome means feellin' good at home, relaxed yuh ain't wanna leave and yeah am a R.O.C fan, a tried the poetry forum just tuh get some feedback and don't be talkin **** about me bein on jay's **** ***** don't ****in' say **** like that, am just musically inspired buy kanye, common an Jay so don't come around me sayin' bull****, don't act like you ain't got a favourite rapper.


look people are inspired by tupac and biggie and nas also jay and the roc team that dont mean you have to mention them in every line you write so what i said before get of jay's d1ck little b1tch....

[JonMen]

look people are inspired by tupac and biggie and nas also jay and the roc team that dont mean you have to mention them in every line you write so what i said before get of jay's d1ck little b1tch....
listen u don't know me i write about 50 songs every week do u think i'll just talk about the roc every ****in time, i rap about all kinds ****, i even rap about blues singers to take it to the extent, if yuh can't take my raps then don't read it, if u just wanna hear sometin' else say so, cause i got a lot letters in my vault.

[#1rapper]

*reads arguement*

*Looks to see if he can speak*

*Walks To the mic, and says*

All in all, ithought it was prett good, yall gotta keep in mind how hard it is to make a remake of anything, and through the wire is a hot ass song so anything that comes close to touching it has to be a little good if not great, props

[JonMen]

*reads arguement*

*Looks to see if he can speak*

*Walks To the mic, and says*

All in all, ithought it was prett good, yall gotta keep in mind how hard it is to make a remake of anything, and through the wire is a hot ass song so anything that comes close to touching it has to be a little good if not great, props
thanks #1 for the props

[Conduit]

First off
"homesome" is not a word. You should take some time to learn your craft, i.e. learn what the right words are and how to use them the right way. Don't take it personally: a lot of people make those sorts of mistakes, here especially. And, even if you are trying to be innovative and make words up, you can't do that without explaining yourself somewhere in your post... otherwise you just come off looking retarded.

Now this
listen u don't know me i write about 50 songs every week do u think i'll just talk about the roc every ****in time, i rap about all kinds ****, i even rap about blues singers to take it to the extent, if yuh can't take my raps then don't read it, if u just wanna hear sometin' else say so, cause i got a lot letters in my vault.

1. "to take it to the extent" -- this is a nonsensical phrase.

2. "listen u don't know me i write about 50 songs every week" -- noone cares. Most of the cats here do that.

3. "if yuh can't take my raps then don't read it, if u just wanna hear sometin' else say so, cause i got a lot letters in my vault" -- So, if I don't like your raps, I shouldn't read them. If I'm not reading them, and don't know what they're about, how can I tell you to rap about something... else? I have to read them first, right?

What I'm trying to say -- in a round-about, insensitive way -- is this: JUST STEP IT UP.

[JonMen]

first of all i didn't create the word "homesome" it's a west indian term:yes: , i know i make a lot a mistakes, but when it comes to the real world, i don't. About the 50 songs com'on, don't u think i know that!? And about readin my raps i wasn't talkin about u. Everybody has to improve, even George Bush. So again about the word it's a west indian thing and if u don't know what west indian means, it's another name for "Caribbean"

[Conduit]

I am West-Indian. I have been surrounded by West-Indians, from nearly all of the islands, since birth and have never once heard that word spoken.
Kill the excuses.

[JonMen]

this is not an excuse, the term is heard a lot nowadays especially in the ghetto. I brought up this word for kicks! It is not proper english and u'll never find it Webster's Dictionary, so stop gettin' all serious about this "slang" cause, u hear words worst this in rap songs and dancehall music, so com'on eliminate this topic!