Untitled..."The Girlfriend"...

[sexydeltagirl]

There is no use in pretending that I'm sleeping..
When I hear him slide his key in the door...
He tries to do it so quietly hoping that the second lock doesn't...
Wake me but it does..
He tiptoes into the kitchen and pulls out the dinner...
That's always waiting for him...
I can hear him chewing and it sends a shot straight through me...
She doesn't cook for him...
But she does something else...
I don't have to question what it is..
Because everytime I try to give him oral sex he resist my advances...
Telling me I use that mouth to kiss his kids...
No woman of his will ever do that...
So he strays to her bed...
Allows that woman to become...
His personal whore....
He gives me backshots slowly and the missionary position....
There's no pulling of the hair, no smacks on my derriere....
He says, he only "fvks her" but he "makes love" to me...
But if love was supposed to bring him home last night it didn't...
I hear the water running..
He's trying his best to wash away her scent...
But even after all the the excessive scrubbing...
I can still smell her...
And as he slides into bed...
I surpress my need to vomit...
As he places a kiss so passionately on my forehead...
I open my eyes slighty...
Look up at the cieling and whisper...
I'm pathetic...

[Irish-dipstick]

There is no use in pretending that I'm sleeping..
When I hear him slide his key in the door...
He tries to do it so quietly hoping that the second lock doesn't...
Wake me but it does..
He tiptoes into the kitchen and pulls out the dinner...
That's always waiting for him...
I can hear him chewing and it sends a shot straight through me...
She doesn't cook for him...
But she does something else...
I don't have to question what it is..
Because everytime I try to give him oral sex he resist my advances...
Telling me I use that mouth to kiss his kids...
No woman of his will ever do that...
So he strays to her bed...
Allows that woman to become...
His personal whore....
He gives me backshots slowly and the missionary position....
There's no pulling of the hair, no smacks on my derriere....
He says, he only "fvks her" but he "makes love" to me...
But if love was supposed to bring him home last night it didn't...
I hear the water running..
He's trying his best to wash away her scent...
But even after all the the excessive scrubbing...
I can still smell her...
And as he slides into bed...
I surpress my need to vomit...
As he places a kiss so passionately on my forehead...
I open my eyes slighty...
Look up at the cieling and whisper...
I'm pathetic...


this is dope i can see where your tryna go with this i read this and it seemed like a link with the first one thatz why i get the impression that your are tryna do a three sides to a story piece even if you were'd at the start seems like it would be a good idea and is still do--able at this moment....

[**MsZ]

WoW!!!! This right here..... :thumbsup:

[Nadira...Rare]

I luv your work I'm been peeking at this page for awhile and I read most everything you write well you and Absoulte... This poem speaks to me I've definitely been here before

[sexydeltagirl]

this is dope i can see where your tryna go with this i read this and it seemed like a link with the first one thatz why i get the impression that your are tryna do a three sides to a story piece even if you were'd at the start seems like it would be a good idea and is still do--able at this moment....

Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it....

Yeah it's a link to the other poem "The Jumpoff" I'll end it with the last
part "Him"...I'm still trying to put it together...it'll be done soon...

[sexydeltagirl]

WoW!!!! This right here..... :thumbsup:

Thanks so much girlie...I'm glad you liked it..I'm still on the lookout for your pieces... :yes:

[sexydeltagirl]

I luv your work I'm been peeking at this page for awhile and I read most everything you write well you and Absoulte... This poem speaks to me I've definitely been here before

Thanks, that really means a lot to me....I try to go there in my pieces sometimes it's fact sometimes it's fiction but it all comes from my heart...I'm glad you could relate to this piece...Many of us have been there before...But tomorrow sometimes brings better days....

Keep writing girlie...I'm growing fond of your work as well....

[slave2aplaya]

[QUOTE=sexydeltagirl]
He says, he only "fvks her" but he "makes love" to me...
But if love was supposed to bring him home last night it didn't...
I hear the water running..
He's trying his best to wash away her scent...
But even after all the the excessive scrubbing...
I can still smell her...
QUOTE]

Im loving it, You know u always tell a story I wanna hear girl.
Keep it up
xXx