This is my first time give me some feedback...Emotional Instability

[Nadira...Rare]

Couldn't have many daydreams today
As good as you made me feel on this day
What does the night bring?
I see another nightmare coming
Forming in the distance
How can I stop it before it gets here?
With you... my very own superman
And my nightmare begins...

I always knew I would die because of love
I've always been emotionally unstable
Looking for others to make me stable... so emotional
I never asked you for anything... but your honesty and love
I ain't never been materialistic
That was all you
You never needed to buy your way into my heart
All I needed was you
Nothing else matters anymore... but you
You... the biggest part of my nightmare
You... the person I would share my every secret with
This world, my world means nothing without you in it
I always knew I would die because of love
I'm so emotional
Crippled by this tragedy... I don't want to eat. I can't move. I can't sleep.

You couldn't feel my pain
I was left alone as you left to work it out with her
I am jealous
I need you to help me through this miscarriage
I want this to be apart of your world... because this Earth can't handle it alone
I've always been emotionally unstable
Looking for someone to make me stable
I am trapped in my thoughts of you
I love you and I don't know why
I'm reaching out my hand
You smack it down
It's a struggle between what I feel is right and what I know is right
I treated you like the King you are
Patiently... chasing you love
Chasing a man
Chasing the nightmare I'm trying to get away from
I believed in you
Made me thank God you were in my life... that I met you

What happened to the Queen I am?

A little piece of me wants to leave you alone...
But the bigger piece of me wants to beg you to come home
You know exactly what to say...
Manipulating my feelings
Mentally fvckin me
Physically...
I am trapped in my thoughts of you
I need you to help me through this miscarriage
I've always been emotionally unstable
and I always knew I would die because of love
This nightmare is my truth
The truth is for everybody but not everybody is ready for the truth
My truth is for you...
What does tomorrow promise?

[**MsZ]

I am really diggin this piece...I am afraid to share, you got more guts than me... :yes:

[Absolut da poet]

wow.

Welcome btw. :hug:

I'm totally feelin this piece...

You couldn't feel my pain
I was left alone as you left to work it out with her
I am jealous
I need you to help me through this miscarriage
I want this to be apart of your world... because this Earth can't handle it alone
I've always been emotionally unstable
Looking for someone to make me stable
I am trapped in my thoughts of you
I love you and I don't know why
I'm reaching out my hand
You smack it down
It's a struggle between what I feel is right and what I know is right
I treated you like the King you are
Patiently... chasing you love


Very nice..please stay awhile and continue to share with us your presence is definetly felt and Absolut-ly needed.

[Absolut da poet]

I am really diggin this piece...I am afraid to share, you got more guts than me... :yes:

give it to me gurl don't be scurred...I can see it in ya eyes that you... ;)

share and share alike...we'll be waiting...

[sexydeltagirl]

Welcome to the Poetry Corner!

This is a really nice piece...I can def. identify with a lot of what you are saying here....
Esp. this part...

I've always been emotionally unstable
and I always knew I would die because of love
This nightmare is my truth
The truth is for everybody but not everybody is ready for the truth
My truth is for you...
What does tomorrow promise?

Dopeness...Keep them coming!

[sexydeltagirl]

I am really diggin this piece...I am afraid to share, you got more guts than me... :yes:

Girlie, don't be scared it's only love in this room....Don't hold back on your gift...Share it with others....You never know someone could really need to read what you have to say....

We will be waiting.... :)

[Nadira...Rare]

Thanks for the love erybody :hug:

[Nadira...Rare]

I am really diggin this piece...I am afraid to share, you got more guts than me... :yes:

Yo if I can do it you can do it I'm a wuss when it comes to putting myself out there and I've been watching for months now afraid to say anything... but I realized I have alot to say... just do it, it'll make you feel good

[Conduit]

hey this is good. please post more here. please.