Poetry Game

[ovb81]

We havent done ne thing as a collective in a while...Got the idea from SDG and ADP..lets get together and write a poem..ill start off..dont matter how long your section is..just try to make it connect with the preceeding section...here is the start..i hope you guys join

Patience is a virtue
But when love is involved
Sh*t gets weak
Aint seen you in 7 days
And weeks get leaked
On pages of agony
That teach slash preach
Past becomes present
Future becomes forgotten

[ovb81]

up...darn it!!!

[Irish-dipstick]

sry i didn't see this im down like butter....toasted :laugh:

[sexydeltagirl]

We havent done ne thing as a collective in a while...Got the idea from SDG and ADP..lets get together and write a poem..ill start off..dont matter how long your section is..just try to make it connect with the preceeding section...here is the start..i hope you guys join

Patience is a virtue
But when love is involved
Sh*t gets weak
Aint seen you in 7 days
And weeks get leaked
On pages of agony
That teach slash preach
Past becomes present
Future becomes forgotten

This is a good idea... :yes:
I hope everyone contributes....Here's my drop.....

So instead of keep praying that one day...
Our past will be become the present...
And you will be in my arms again....
I venture to that place called isloation....
Might need a floation device to rescue me...
From the sorrow that I'm drowing in....
So even though I'm smiling on the outside..
On the inside I'm drying...
Wondering why..
Our future became forgotten....

[Absolut da poet]

This is a good idea... :yes:
I hope everyone contributes....Here's my drop.....

So instead of keep praying that one day...
Our past will be become the present...
And you will be in my arms again....
I venture to that place called isloation....
Might need a floation device to rescue me...
From the sorrow that I'm drowing in....
So even though I'm smiling on the outside..
On the inside I'm drying...
Wondering why..
Our future became forgotten....

that's wassup...I'm down....let's keep this moving.. :yes:

and the reality... I'm realizing..in every breath..
*exhales*
...you learn a lot about life...facing death..
Staring across at what’s left..straight vodkas' touching my heart’s depth.
It burns slow til I lose sleep just chasing the rest..
Watching how the picture reflects the memories lack of respect...
through the looking glass... every 1st and last.. is a test
til the last drop...I'm feelin twisted through the pass..t....yet...
my time on the rocks sets...tomorrows regret..
for having hope in a bottle ..as I remember you..

...

[Nadira...Rare]

that's wassup...I'm down....let's keep this moving.. :yes:

and the reality... I'm realizing..in every breath..
*exhales*
...you learn a lot about life...facing death..
Staring across at what’s left..straight vodkas' touching my heart’s depth.
It burns slow til I lose sleep just chasing the rest..
Watching how the picture reflects the memories lack of respect...
through the looking glass... every 1st and last.. is a test
til the last drop...I'm feelin twisted through the pass..t....yet...
my time on the rocks sets...tomorrows regret..
for having hope in a bottle ..as I remember you..

....

I'll try :unsure: ...

As I remember you my anger festers
I was so angry with you... with God... with you
Anger is real...
It lives... not in a bottle...It lives with each thought we have
It's real... and...
It burns with the thoughts of being forgotten...
Shocking is the moment you realize you are all alone...
I found you in my past but you are all my destiny manifest..
My destiny changed the moment you left...
And when I try to forget it whispers sweet memories of what we shared...
And the reasons you left...

[ovb81]

I'll try :unsure: ...

As I remember you my anger festers
I was so angry with you... with God... with you
Anger is real...
It lives... not in a bottle...It lives with each thought we have
It's real... and...
It burns with the thoughts of being forgotten...
Shocking is the moment you realize you are all alone...
I found you in my past but you are all my destiny manifest..
My destiny changed the moment you left...
And when I try to forget it whispers sweet memories of what we shared...
And the reasons you left...

love becomes an after thought
You and I is what disaster sought
A sentimental moment became
A monumental event
When you said goodbye
I didn’t think you meant
forever
When we last kissed I didn’t think I had to revel
In the essence of the abyss you call lips
How I long to take that journey again
I was blind but ignorance is bliss
Our relationship was on a don’t ask don’t tell basis

[Irish-dipstick]

love becomes an after thought
You and I is what disaster sought
A sentimental moment became
A monumental event
When you said goodbye
I didn’t think you meant
forever
When we last kissed I didn’t think I had to revel
In the essence of the abyss you call lips
How I long to take that journey again
I was blind but ignorance is bliss
Our relationship was on a don’t ask don’t tell basis


love and hate the defination of friends and snakes
plans we make never work out its always for gods sake
why god got to comtimplate the simple cause the simple
life is what i need not complex needs not a world of war
for my seeds please is love so weak that war proceeds
people deceased look closer to home the war is on the streets
i just think some things in life are worth my own war
zones are stupid bring the troops home to their families
i dont care what u make of me cause this is my destiny
im just spreading the truth.....

[Nadira...Rare]

love and hate the defination of friends and snakes
plans we make never work out its always for gods sake
why god got to comtimplate the simple cause the simple
life is what i need not complex needs not a world of war
for my seeds please is love so weak that war proceeds
people deceased look closer to home the war is on the streets
i just think some things in life are worth my own war
zones are stupid bring the troops home to their families
i dont care what u make of me cause this is my destiny
im just spreading the truth.....

War zones... this ain't no war zone
Just bring your azz home
We won't be beefing fighting battles in our home
I've watched you change
I don't know the person you become
Why are you bringing the seed you took heed to accepting in to this?
Your truth is my truth but you are a liar
Any future we had was all a lie
Trusting you again is an unnecessary risk
Simple life? but YOU make everything complex
Causing the relationship stress

[Absolut da poet]

War zones... this ain't no war zone
Just bring your azz home
We won't be beefing fighting battles in our home
I've watched you change
I don't know the person you become
Why are you bringing the seed you took heed to accepting in to this?
Your truth is my truth but you are a liar
Any future we had was all a lie
Trusting you again is an unnecessary risk
Simple life? but YOU make everything complex
Causing the relationship stress


Where exactly do lovers go when love is gone ?
......
.........Nadira....!?!
:unsure:
.....
Can these feelings be held if I'm damned to move on...
Lonely as a man only missing the sun in mourn and...
Parts of me so torn...like time's...
You rise and then surprise..your gone..
As darkness lines..
My eyes filled wIse from the lies each day born...
cries..til PM..
you being my B.M. Or... mother of these aborted tiers I'm seein...
I weep...
......
For all these parts of me that are cast away...
My heart and soul like saints...past a way in the latter day...
So no faith has me believing in the next...

[Irish-dipstick]

Where exactly do lovers go when love is gone ?
......
.........Nadira....!?!
:unsure:
.....
Can these feelings be held if I'm damned to move on...
Lonely as a man only missing the sun in mourn and...
Parts of me so torn...like time's...
You rise and then surprise..your gone..
As darkness lines..
My eyes filled wIse from the lies each day born...
cries..til PM..
you being my B.M. Or... mother of these aborted tiers I'm seein...
I weep...
......
For all these parts of me that are cast away...
My heart and soul like saints...past a way in the latter day...
So no faith has me believing in the next...

my eyes are now open born into a world with anger
think i could have been snatched by a stranger
and never told...never to know who i really am
whos to blame dam...abortion sounds like a good plan
but then i made it they never took my life only
for me to fight for food and be cold every single night
cause life is hard how will i get a job support a family
when daily im getting robbed by fiends and the government
it seems like im trapped and never to be awake again
sun light is gone....oh and forget your friends
cause in a day they'll be gone in an instant as god
as my witness....you'll never walk the world again....