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sexydeltagirl
05-08-06, 07:37 PM
Yes, you surprised me...
Quite possibly caused this....
Out-Spoken woman to remain silent...
I couldn't stop shaking my head or my legs for that matter....
I took for granted your silent demeanor....
You not really talking about your sexual prowess...
Even though I said I promise....
I'm worth you having to skip work on Monday..
Now the jokes on me...
And I can't even manage to sit up straight...
My body feeling like I was in a marathon...
And you were a spectator....
Holding out more than just water...
You must have had Red Bull in that cup...
My facial expressions......
Priceless....
You are getting dressed yet I'm laying still naked...
Hair tossed around like the girl from The Exorcist...
I think I foamed at the mouth...
Sheets still wet from the combination of sweat and sex...
Damn!
So uhh let me at least see you to the door....
You gester for to get me to remain still...
I would need all of my energy for tonight...
For tonight we continue...
Round 5,6, I think I lost count....
So I watch you stroll...
Your swagger impeccable....
Head held up high...One arm slightly extended in front of the other...
And eventhough you didn't see me watching from the window..
I saw you do that fist pump...
You are one sneaky muthafukker!
I rest my hands against the wall and brace myself...
My body hasn't fully recovered yet...
What the hell have I gotten myself into....

Irish-dipstick
05-08-06, 07:50 PM
Yes, you surprised me...
Quite possibly caused this....
Out-Spoken woman to remain silent...
I couldn't stop shaking my head or my legs for that matter....
I took for granted your silent demeanor....
You not really talking about your sexual prowess...
Even though I said I promise....
I'm worth you having to skip work on Monday..
Now the jokes on me...
And I can't even manage to sit up straight...
My body feeling like I was in a marathon...
And you were a spectator....
Holding out more than just water...
You must have had Red Bull in that cup...
My facial expressions......
Priceless....
You are getting dressed yet I'm laying still naked...
Hair tossed around like the girl from The Exorcist...
I think I foamed at the mouth...
Sheets still wet from the combination of sweat and sex...
Damn!
So uhh let me at least see you to the door....
You gester for to get me to remain still...
I would need all of my energy for tonight...
For tonight we continue...
Round 5,6, I think I lost count....
So I watch you stroll...
Your swagger impeccable....
Head held up high...One arm slightly extended in front of the other...
And eventhough you didn't see me watching from the window..
I saw you do that fist pump...
You are one sneaky muthafukker!
I rest my hands against the wall and brace myself...
My body hasn't fully recovered yet...
What the hell have I gotten myself into....


i see this as a strange piece but a good piece to i see it starting of into a love fantasy and then getting dramatic at the end when you start saying:

"You are one sneaky muthafukker!
I rest my hands against the wall and brace myself...
My body hasn't fully recovered yet...
What the hell have I gotten myself into"

sexydeltagirl
05-08-06, 07:53 PM
i see this as a strange piece but a good piece to i see it starting of into a love fantasy and then getting dramatic at the end when you start saying:

"You are one sneaky muthafukker!
I rest my hands against the wall and brace myself...
My body hasn't fully recovered yet...
What the hell have I gotten myself into"

Yeah it was all fantasy....just wanted to add a little something at the end...

Thanks for checking this joint out!.... ;)

Irish-dipstick
05-08-06, 07:55 PM
yep its fresh compared to recent drops including my own bout this heaven and hell reality thing

sexydeltagirl
05-08-06, 07:56 PM
yep its fresh compared to recent drops including my own bout this heaven and hell reality thing

Yeah I wrote a couple more joints on the whole church,heaven,hell,GOD but I just said down and this is what came to me....

It made me laugh....I needed this today.....

Irish-dipstick
05-08-06, 08:00 PM
Yeah I wrote a couple more joints on the whole church,heaven,hell,GOD but I just said down and this is what came to me....

It made me laugh....I needed this today.....

the true power of poetry is the poets feelings-believe dat sister lol :laugh:

"the true power of poetry is the poets feelings"

^^^^
t r u e

**MsZ
05-15-06, 08:06 PM
This right here....is one of your best pieces.... :yes: