Untitled...My Dying Day...

[sexydeltagirl]

The day they bury me....
6feet deep under the cold dirt...
Don't cry for me...
Better yet, rejoice in the fact that I have...
Left this place that never wanted me here....
In the first place...
I was a mistake...
But it took place...
Cause my momma thought she was in love...
Sadly enough love didn't live in GA anymore...
So she got a ring and did some traveling..
And landed in Baltimore City....
We got here....
Life was no crystal stair...
From being homeless to almost..
Living a lifestyle of the rich....
We survived...
The only way we knew how...
The project building sure know how to comfort a child...
So as I....
Lay in my coffin...
I"m not ashamed of the life I've lived...
The Men I've loved...
And those who didn't love me in return...
But you...
I want you to forgive me...
I'm sorry I didn't marry you when you asked me 2...
Telling me what a great wife I'd be...
Giving you some children...
Making giving you the next Michael Jordan...
But in the end...
The only thing I gave you was...
Heartache and resentment...
Acted out in arguments, slapped faces...and smeared make-up..
But we never forgot what got us there...
Love...
So as I'm lowered in to the ground...
I'll try to send my spirit to comfort you...
Don't fight her when she arrives...
Like I did your love...
I'm tired of saying no to you...
To bad I'm a little 2 late...

[Conduit]

word... I'm about to reply to another one of your joints. question: why is the word men in "The Men" capitalized? Any significance there? Like Men vs. boys or something? Just curious.

[sexydeltagirl]

word... I'm about to reply to another one of your joints. question: why is the word men in "The Men" capitalized? Any significance there? Like Men vs. boys or something? Just curious.

Yep, you are very observant.....Upon my death it will be the love I received from MEN that I will remember most....

[Irish-dipstick]

The day they bury me....
6feet deep under the cold dirt...
Don't cry for me...
Better yet, rejoice in the fact that I have...
Left this place that never wanted me here....
In the first place...
I was a mistake...
But it took place...
Cause my momma thought she was in love...
Sadly enough love didn't live in GA anymore...
So she got a ring and did some traveling..
And landed in Baltimore City....
We got here....
Life was no crystal stair...
From being homeless to almost..
Living a lifestyle of the rich....
We survived...
The only way we knew how...
The project building sure know how to comfort a child...
So as I....
Lay in my coffin...
I"m not ashamed of the life I've lived...
The Men I've loved...
And those who didn't love me in return...
But you...
I want you to forgive me...
I'm sorry I didn't marry you when you asked me 2...
Telling me what a great wife I'd be...
Giving you some children...
Making giving you the next Michael Jordan...
But in the end...
The only thing I gave you was...
Heartache and resentment...
Acted out in arguments, slapped faces...and smeared make-up..
But we never forgot what got us there...
Love...
So as I'm lowered in to the ground...
I'll try to send my spirit to comfort you...
Don't fight her when she arrives...
Like I did your love...
I'm tired of saying no to you...
To bad I'm a little 2 late...


first of all nice piece i think itz better to write about death if itz hard to deal with.....anyway i agree with conduit on the whole The Men thing and the love you recieved from them will alwasy be remembered first....dam girl deep but you need only look at sohh to see the males tripping on your work.


i aint a player i just fcuk alot. :smoker:

[sexydeltagirl]

first of all nice piece i think itz better to write about death if itz hard to deal with.....anyway i agree with conduit on the whole The Men thing and the love you recieved from them will alwasy be remembered first....dam girl deep but you need only look at sohh to see the males tripping on your work.


i aint a player i just fcuk alot. :smoker:

Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it....

and :laugh: @ your last comment....

[Irish-dipstick]

Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it....

and :laugh: @ your last comment....

its true peep the game honnie lol nice work on this for real though

[sexydeltagirl]

its true peep the game honnie lol nice work on this for real though

I believe you! it's nothing wrong with having good love in your life..
Thanks again.... ;)

[Irish-dipstick]

I believe you! it's nothing wrong with having good love in your life..
Thanks again.... ;)

:laugh: true

[slave2aplaya]

every piece I read of yours just builds up the utmost respect I have 4 you, you know its always love. evocative.
always keep on.
xXx

[sexydeltagirl]

every piece I read of yours just builds up the utmost respect I have 4 you, you know its always love. evocative.
always keep on.
xXx
Hey Miss, I'm so sorry I missed this compliment but I really appreciate your kind words....

I'm glad to see you back around these parts....

[Nadira...Rare]

good shyt

[Ecliptik]

nothin to say but nice really...

[sexydeltagirl]

good shyt
Hey Lady, I'm glad you liked it...

[sexydeltagirl]

nothin to say but nice really...
Thanks, and I look forward to you dropping some pieces~

Welcome :)

[Red X]

nice, as always

[sexydeltagirl]

nice, as always
Thanks babe, I appreciate it!