on another note....

[Irish-dipstick]

In the event of my death.

in the event of my death take my
children through life step by step
my heart beat is zero im on my last
breath i can now see the depth
of darkness i can sitback and let it
happen or stand up and do something
but i feel num dont really want to do it
but it has to be done if not me then
another goes through and just..um...
i quess its just a question of time a
question for the mind can u last long
i doubt it so why wont people care
if im just taken out it really dont matter
no-one cares enough to save me they
all just leave me contimplate why they
see me but still im alive now but not for
long ill soon return to where i belong
the only place that truely loves us all
where we can have a ball...but it true...
life is a b1tch turn it and sw1tch a
b1tch is life woman are life they give
birth until my return to the eternal light

[Absolut da poet]

interesting...

keep it comin...

[sexydeltagirl]

mmmm, so many ways I interpeted this joint...

Very nice....I like to try to understand where you are coming from....

[Irish-dipstick]

ok let me break this down now what i start of saying is:

in the event of my death take my children through life step by step.

meaning i wont be around to see them mature or grow older my life ends at a specific point and i belief i live fast and die young..

i can see the depth of darkness.

meaning im getting closer to the end..

why wont people care if im taken out.

giving a reason for thought..

life is a b1tch turn it and sw1tch a b1tch is life woman are life they give birth until my return to the eternal light.

meaning now i can see life as it is life is hard dam hard but thatz the way it is females endure pain to bring us into this world...and something must be repaid in a sense that we must bare pain to exit this life and also leave pain behind....in our families...

thatz how it is yah no peep your opinion..peeps

and thankz for the comments

[sexydeltagirl]

Thanks so much for breaking it down for me...I understand it much better now...

[Irish-dipstick]

thankz for letting me know..about you not understanding

[Absolut da poet]

damn...

I like your breakdown...

I usually don't do the breakdown thing cause I've often felt that it closes some avenues of the imagination for the reader...I kinda like a piece to be open to all kinds of interpretation... but on the flip side...I like where you're coming from with this... ..


nice.

[Irish-dipstick]

thankz for peeping this i appreciate the comments.....

[Conduit]

word.. this was cool.

[Irish-dipstick]

word.. this was cool.

peaCe