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Irish-dipstick
04-28-06, 01:42 PM
...gonna kick this smooth sh1t.

u puzzle me girl u r my world u got my tongue
in a twist and u know i love but i can't put that
gold round ur wrist, love dont cost a thing but
thatz all i got im an addict to roc i wish i could
stop and treat like u should be treat and buy u
things diamond rings make-up and other girly things
but girl you know im good to ya and thatz why you
stay you no i aint got no money but u say its ok
so..i sit back i just like the way you shake your ass
and move your hips the way kiss me with your tender
lipz and though i know baby i drive you crazy but i
know you'll never get better man to replace me
your the girl of my dreams we are the perfect team
you'll never no how important your are to my lifestyle
u stop me from going buckwild and getting killed
your the one who took me of those deadly pills yet
i know im tryna quit it gets harder day by day
but i see how much your life is wasting caring for me
i'd rather kill myself than have look after me it aint
fair and you say "nothin in life is" and u bend down and
give me a kiss but i know about all the hard times we been
through and im dam sure id be dead without u but i know
ill always look to sort the occassional key maybe you be
better off and just replace me.

but i gotta keep my head up.

but u can't stay.

cause ur lifes ok its mines thatz fcuked.

homeyjay
04-28-06, 02:24 PM
...gonna kick this smooth sh1t.

u puzzle me girl u r my world u got my tongue
in a twist and u know i love but i can't put that
gold round ur wrist, love dont cost a thing but
thatz all i got im an addict to roc i wish i could
stop and treat like u should be treat and buy u
things diamond rings make-up and other girly things
but girl you know im good to ya and thatz why you
stay you no i aint got no money but u say its ok
so..i sit back i just like the way you shake your ass
and move your hips the way kiss me with your tender
lipz and though i know baby i drive you crazy but i
know you'll never get better man to replace me
your the girl of my dreams we are the perfect team
you'll never no how important your are to my lifestyle
u stop me from going buckwild and getting killed
your the one who took me of those deadly pills yet
i know im tryna quit it gets harder day by day
but i see how much your life is wasting caring for me
i'd rather kill myself than have look after me it aint
fair and you say "nothin in life is" and u bend down and
give me a kiss but i know about all the hard times we been
through and im dam sure id be dead without u but i know
ill always look to sort the occassional key maybe you be
better off and just replace me.

but i gotta keep my head up.

but u can't stay.

cause ur lifes ok its mines thatz fcuked.

Well I.D. - let me see nice flow, good rhyme scheme. I'll give you an aiight!
j/k naw my this was a nice piece, so all I can say is get down with your bad self, who said that you can't be hard and have a heart too. post on dogg.

Irish-dipstick
04-28-06, 09:15 PM
dam thanxz for the feedback home boy.

the poems i write are showing the side i dont normally show to people ya digg