strictly rebel

[ILL_FAM]

i am the rebel stop eying up the rebel
i leave fields burned i leaveu in trouble
i am the rebel hit the underground swinging
im a rapper no singing i am the rebel hit the
bass in ur face with the treble im the rebel


rebel me this rebel me that who got the gat
packed cause i got cut loose some strapped
cats i gotta drop this cut throat rap
now get the image the kid is so ill and has a will
to kill in a second u'll regreting about the stress
ya'll was pressing and weak lines u got in ur possession
could never front me please get up of ur knees
i got g's and coke cuts hanging up above i call em
white doves bringing that high theme with thug love
for the thugged ones with the loaded guns and slugs
for the dozen that was bustin and never got chance
it was like it wasn't, now switch the topic so i can
rock it can i get a roc hit stronger than my spit
stronger than an un-wasted clit its the sh1t

but remember....

i am the rebel stop eying up the rebel
i leave fields burned i leave u in trouble
i am the rebel hit the underground swinging
im a rapper no singing i am the rebel hit the
bass in ur face with the treble im the rebel

im the rebel coming with that sick spit on
some sick sh1t like my d1ck with the last chick
she was screaming pulled it out put it in dam
b1tch u was creaming i was ripping u a new
whole hit with force and it burst but i came first
but i gotta say it worked now back to the rebel
and a rebelling fact once u get jacked then u
jack back cause us crazy muthers never sit back
always looking for money to stack and when are
mind is blocked and are lines are coop u gotta stop
kick back on the crack pipe.....u asswipe

i am the rebel stop eying up the rebel
i leave fields burned i leave u in trouble
i am the rebel hit the underground swinging
im a rapper no singing i am the rebel hit the
bass in ur face with the treble im the rebel

[Doc Holla]

This Was Iight Try To Stick To The Point Of Ya Hook. I Think U Could Have Did A Lil Betta Though Nice Peace

[ILL_FAM]

This Was Iight Try To Stick To The Point Of Ya Hook. I Think U Could Have Did A Lil Betta Though Nice Peace


felt....

[theman080]

the first stanza made me laugh

[Ed Blank]

Wack.

Lyricism is about wordplay.

Gansta rap is what's hot right now, but the illest MCs still flip the verbals. You just tried to emulate the pop **** that's out right now. Focus on the ill punch lines, not the verbal gunplay.

[ILL_FAM]

fair comments but ed-banks thatz what i want to do i dont care if itz not hot....

[yaga]

Focus on the ill punch lines, not the verbal gunplay.

"Ill punch lines" is "what's hot right now."

And what's "hot" isn't always good. Gangsta is what it is. Don't confuse your brainshashed style with someone elses.