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homeyjay
04-20-06, 06:13 PM
i admit that i was a nervous wreck
i took deep breaths to stay in check
it's a go no other chances would i get
had to get back that thing called respect

i walked to the window that was cracked
peeped in saw him sleeping on his back
i knew that now was the time i had to act
if the tables were turned i'd get no slack

as i creped through the window opening
he was smiling it must a been a good dream
i sliced him a crossed his throat no scream
and watched the blood flow like a wild thing

i will never forget that look in his eyes
as his body stiffened and started to rise
i was in schock as he steady rose to the skies
yet i felt no remorse for he i did so despise

still i did not believe what i had just done
and a burden was lifted that weighted a ton
i was at a loss as to how this ordeal had begun
only knew the battle was over and that i had won

on the inside of me was joy and effervescence
and i felt i had just learned a valuable lesson
in regards to one's vengence and aggression
did i really treat that scene like a delicatessen?

at least one part of my life has been straighten
don't know how many nights were spent contemplating
if i didn't make that move the i'd still be out there waiting
you can't slow drag at the chance to take out satan

HipHop4ever
04-21-06, 05:37 PM
Man that was deep yo. Every day is a constant battle with the devil himself.

homeyjay
04-26-06, 02:06 PM
Man that was deep yo. Every day is a constant battle with the devil himself.
Thanks 4 da peep, and tru dat but not only ehh day but ehh sec, is a battle.

Absolut da poet
04-26-06, 09:26 PM
I liked this... :yes:

sexydeltagirl
04-27-06, 05:48 PM
Very nice piece....I can identify with so much of it....
Keep on keepin on my brotha....

pryncess31400
04-27-06, 11:39 PM
Damn, that was real cool.

homeyjay
04-28-06, 11:26 AM
Thank You my Sisters, for your kind and encouraging words. nuff respect to You.

Conduit
04-28-06, 02:55 PM
ha... nice one