Untitled....Don't Hold Your Breath.....

[sexydeltagirl]

You are standing by the door holding the knob in your hand....
Thinking maybe I'll drop my things and remain...
Committed...
Faithful to this once great man who decided to take his left hand and...
Decorate my face with it...
Your hand print still visible....
Not even MAC can cover the damage...
An eraserable mark on my face but a permanent one my....
Soul....
I'm halfway dressed....my bra strap rests on my shoulder....
Clothes in a trash bag in one hand....
Keys to my car in the other....
And eventhough I didn't swing back...
My head is held high...
My pride is in tack....
So as I watch your mouth move and utter...
Words of forgiveness...
My thoughts are on the world outside the door...
Please step aside and let me greet...
My Dignity....

[MESO]

I really like your writing..I can relate to it on several levels...probably half of 'em you never meant for me to think of, but that's the beauty of it all.

[sexydeltagirl]

I really like your writing..I can relate to it on several levels...probably half of 'em you never meant for me to think of, but that's the beauty of it all.

Wow, words really can't express my appreciation for this...(really)....I'm glad you can relate to my words....It really makes this writing thing worthwhile and truthfully I am thinking of you when I write...everyone who reads my work actually...I'm hoping that at least one person will relate...and I'm honored that you have....

Thanks again......... :)

And I enjoy your writing also...You don't notice when you post a piece I come back with one....Thanks for the inspiration.....