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Courtdog
04-18-06, 06:13 AM
I chill on the humble
Tryin to do god's will.. but I stumble
Gettin caught up in this concrete jungle
I'm ready to rumble!
Or is it I'm just ready to succumb to, all the dumbs#it a niqqa run thru
I try not
But I still want to..

Slowly losing my patience til theres no vacancy
Niqqaz be hate'n on me, blatantly
Flagrantly
But most cases be, in moderation..

Yet as these cases build up
& Frustration sets in
How these niqqaz & bitc#es, that used to be my best friends?
Try to treat me like I'm less then
NO EXCEPTIONS :dry:
Take 10 steps then Spin in the opposite direction
Brandishin' your weapon
For your own protection, I'm unarmed
That doesnt mean, bodily harm wont be caused
I choose to pause, then over-analyze my flaws in this


RollerCoaster .. Mental RollerCoaster
Crazy thoughts... sometimes I feel I'm lost :huh:
Such Joy, Such Pain, Sohh much to gain
Sohh much to lose
What choice do I choose? (Its up to you)

RollerCoaster .. Mental RollerCoaster
Crazy thoughts... sometimes I feel I'm lost :huh:
Such Joy, Such Pain, Sohh much to gain
Sohh much to lose
What choice do I choose?


TBC...

Con FusIon
04-19-06, 09:52 AM
decetn keystyle... nice chorus, too... except that any hook with the word "kosher" in it cannot, by definition, be "dope"... lol

Will look for more stuff from you. I'm in VA too, by the way.

Are you new cats criminals for real or is it just a lyrical thing?

Invisible Vision
04-20-06, 12:15 AM
flow was solid in the beginning


overall not bad

not thought provoking, but as con fu said, as a keystyle goes... pretty decent


stay up

Courtdog
04-20-06, 01:06 AM
RollerCoasters, Mental RollerCoaster
Let your mind & spirit, get a lil closer
You dont have to fear it, just do what you supposed ta
And everything will be kosher

Thats for con :smoker:

Much pc-ation V I worshowski...