Untitled...Welcome Me Back

[sexydeltagirl]

I shake the snow off my coat...
I"m here again...
I'm home...
I vowed, I would never return....
This house was no longer my home...
You cursed me, told me that I was no longer a child...
I wore clothes that showed my bossom..
Skirts that inched closer to the derriere...
You would tell me I'm not built like younger girls...
I had the body of a woman at 15....
Easy there baby you have all the time in the world...
To entice those young boys...
Focus on your school work....
Go to college...make it our here...
Yet I didn't listen...
The streets were calling me...
Telling me I needed to be out there with them...
Right by his side, griding.....
Holding nickles and dimes in VS bras...
Knowing how to cook and cut it....
Bag it and sell it...
Hustlin....
Life has a strange way of taking you from where you don't belong...
It took one bullet to the head for him...
It took a gun being pointed at me to change...
So I switched up the plan, landed on a college campus...
Established myself...
I got something to live for...
You didn't believe me until that day...
When you applauded...
Your baby in a body of a grown woman...
Had made it...
So as we stand facing each other...
No words needed to be spoken...
I'm home mama...
Welcome me back.....

[WHAT_THE_FEEZY!!]

Wow....good stuff

You should write a book or something.....

[sexydeltagirl]

Wow....good stuff

You should write a book or something.....

Thanks, I'm glad you liekd it....

Ironically, I am writing a book....but it seems I get a spark everynow and then and do a couple of pages and then I don't pick it up for another month or so....I need to get more focused on it...But my mind is taking me other places....

I'll finish it in due time.....

[Conduit]

nice... seems like you have a wealth of experiences to pull inspiration from.

[WHAT_THE_FEEZY!!]

Thanks, I'm glad you liekd it....

Ironically, I am writing a book....but it seems I get a spark everynow and then and do a couple of pages and then I don't pick it up for another month or so....I need to get more focused on it...But my mind is taking me other places....

I'll finish it in due time.....
Yeah, you can't rush perfection

[Thatgirlisme]

Thanks, I'm glad you liekd it....

Ironically, I am writing a book....but it seems I get a spark everynow and then and do a couple of pages and then I don't pick it up for another month or so....I need to get more focused on it...But my mind is taking me other places....

I'll finish it in due time.....
Book of poetry or what?

[Irish-dipstick]

great piece

[sexydeltagirl]

Book of poetry or what?

It started off as a book based on this female character....Now I've shifted it to focus on her entire family....and I'm stuck because I'm trying to develop the characters more...and I don't know what to write...

But my book of erotic stories is coming quite nicely....go figure

[sexydeltagirl]

great piece

Thanks babe...

[Irish-dipstick]

It started off as a book based on this female character....Now I've shifted it to focus on her entire family....and I'm stuck because I'm trying to develop the characters more...and I don't know what to write...

But my book of erotic stories is coming quite nicely....go figure


when you drop this book are you getting it published for real or are you gonna put it on the net....

[sexydeltagirl]

when you drop this book are you getting it published for real or are you gonna put it on the net....

I'm going to push it to a few publishing companies and if they don't bite...I'll probably bring it to print on my own...

[Irish-dipstick]

kool i may try and check that though so keep us updated........

[Prophetic-Poet]

…Your heart… forgiving and nurturing…tender and giving
…Your soul…. Compassionate and lavish…the essence of a beautiful woman
…Your aura…pure of heart and love…surrounds everything in its reach
…Your words…comforting and wise…enticing and seductive
…….Your spirit….Carefree and bubbly… bold and open
…Your generosity…endless and beneficial
You’re a woman among women
Your the simple pleasures of life
My life changes every time we talk
I grew into a person that I can’t defeat
I’m flying…free….
Like a butterfly that sees things brighter
With more beauty everyday
You’ve given me freedom to be me
You possess the keys to my outside thoughts that put me in chains
As winter grow colder…you warm up to me
As I fall to the earth in pain...you pick me up with a remedy
The year you were born
The first seeds of brilliance were laid
It’s an honor for diamond and gold to touch you
Yes…baby…sit back and wonder
The stars are at rest
Waiting for you to turn the corner

[Irish-dipstick]

ive seen that piece before and ive commented on it itz a good piece.... :yes:

[sexydeltagirl]

kool i may try and check that though so keep us updated........

Of course I will...

[Absolut da poet]

I shake the snow off my coat...
I"m here again...
I'm home...
I vowed, I would never return....
This house was no longer my home...
You cursed me, told me that I was no longer a child...
I wore clothes that showed my bossom..
Skirts that inched closer to the derriere...
You would tell me I'm not built like younger girls...
I had the body of a woman at 15....
Easy there baby you have all the time in the world...
To entice those young boys...
Focus on your school work....
Go to college...make it our here...
Yet I didn't listen...
The streets were calling me...
Telling me I needed to be out there with them...
Right by his side, griding.....
Holding nickles and dimes in VS bras...
Knowing how to cook and cut it....
Bag it and sell it...
Hustlin....
Life has a strange way of taking you from where you don't belong...
It took one bullet to the head for him...
It took a gun being pointed at me to change...
So I switched up the plan, landed on a college campus...
Established myself...
I got something to live for...
You didn't believe me until that day...
When you applauded...
Your baby in a body of a grown woman...
Had made it...
So as we stand facing each other...
No words needed to be spoken...
I'm home mama...
Welcome me back.....

DAMN...

I ABSOLUT~LY LOVE IT!!!

damn gurl you doin ya thing... :yes:

I'm feelin you..you gon make me come outta retirement..lol

[sexydeltagirl]

DAMN...

I ABSOLUT~LY LOVE IT!!!

damn gurl you doin ya thing... :yes:

I'm feelin you..you gon make me come outta retirement..lol

:blush: Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it...This joint is a very personal piece and rather old...But everytime I read it...I'm reminded of how far I've come...

And please come outta retirement...the game needs you...lol

[Absolut da poet]

:blush: Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it...This joint is a very personal piece and rather old...But everytime I read it...I'm reminded of how far I've come...

And please come outta retirement...the game needs you...lol
lolol
:laugh:


yeah I feel u tho..the personal joints are usually the easiest to write.

you're a Godsend to the game...like LeBron & Kobe lol...

I'm inspired watchin u do whatchu do