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Mr.Lyrical Content
04-10-06, 08:32 PM
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Lyrical Content
04-10-06, 10:46 PM
ayo Ima murda you fam
ayo Ima murda you fam
Here we go again:
Ay yo, Lyrical, are you mad that I exposed you/
I ain't mean any harm, I just figured it was old news/
You know the way that you and Coates be bickerin'/
Be nit-pickin' bout if his prick is bigger than/
Mr. Ill Fam, the lil’ stan, the neighborhood milk man/
Who spilt your box of crayons in the sandlot then ran/
Yeah, I’ll battle both of you, oops, I mean your whole crew/
Troops can’t even hold the frontlines cause I broke through/
It’s use-less for-you to use ex-cu-ses/
When you-said you-bet that you can beat-who’s-best/
But who’s-best is-proved by who can be ruth-less/
Who can be abusive, let-loose, and then lose-grip/
You’ve moved-bricks? I-bet, your words have just bruised-sets/
I’ve proven who’s the best-b!tch, this is all you-get/
So who's-next?
And stop trying to be a gangsta!
That was for Mr. Lyrical
I already crushed Lyrical
And what the fukk is up with the names, ya'll butt buddies or something?
Same person?
I like how he takes all night to write a response.
Mr.Lyrical Content
04-11-06, 06:46 AM
Here we go again:
Ay yo, Lyrical, are you mad that I exposed you/
I ain't mean any harm, I just figured it was old news/
You know the way that you and Coates be bickerin'/
Be nit-pickin' bout if his prick is bigger than/
Mr. Ill Fam, the lil’ stan, the neighborhood milk man/
Who spilt your box of crayons in the sandlot then ran/
Yeah, I’ll battle both of you, oops, I mean your whole crew/
Troops can’t even hold the frontlines cause I broke through/
It’s use-less for-you to use ex-cu-ses/
When you-said you-bet that you can beat-who’s-best/
But who’s-best is-proved by who can be ruth-less/
Who can be abusive, let-loose, and then lose-grip/
You’ve moved-bricks? I-bet, your words have just bruised-sets/
I’ve proven who’s the best-b!tch, this is all you-get/
So who's-next?
And stop trying to be a gangsta!
Stop trying to be a ******! Bring yo faggy-ass out that closet
Its logic, since everyone of your rhymes is homo-erotic (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=700748&page=2&pp=15)
That Ghost9 & his pop's relationship was more than platonic
Now its taking its toll on the "Laveranues Coles" of Sohh! (http://sports.espn.go.com/nfl/news/story?id=2165781)
So now your known as a queer
And it appears, that felix tito trinidad will have a lot mo' competition this year
To everyone its clear
This kid is a fukkin loser :yes:
Even before you started makin' threads about the openings of hooters (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=370447)
Your mind moves too slow, not fast enough for versus
You'll go from nurses, to hearses, to under the dirt b!tch
RIVALturf ruthlessly disperses the worthless
With flawless victories
Cause I'm perfect with the word flips
And quotes like these only mean you nervous!
I like how he takes all night to write a response.
Stop trying to be a ******! Bring yo faggy-ass out that closet
Its logic, since everyone of your rhymes is homo-erotic (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=700748&page=2&pp=15)
That Ghost9 & his pop's relationship was more than platonic
Now its taking its toll on the "Laveranues Coles" of Sohh! (http://sports.espn.go.com/nfl/news/story?id=2165781)
So now your known as a queer
And it appears, that felix tito trinidad will have a lot mo' competition this year
To everyone its clear
This kid is a fukkin loser :yes:
Even before you started makin' threads about the openings of hooters (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=370447)
Your mind moves too slow, not fast enough for versus
You'll go from nurses, to hearses, to under the dirt b!tch
RIVALturf ruthlessly disperses the worthless
With flawless victories
Cause I'm perfect with the word flips
And quotes like these only mean you nervous!
Cot damn, you really did take all night to write that shyt. Went through all my old threads all the way back to 2003, posting links and shyt. WTF.
And your rhythm is horrible.
It's all good though:
The truth is, you'll prolly end up like Proof did/
Slick talking in the booth’ll get you breathin’ through tubes kid/
A few up in your ribs and you’ll be usin’ a bib/
Too many in the lid and you’ll be blue in the lips/
Catch one in the stomach, you’ll just get fukked up from it/
But even if you die, what you write won’t get published/
Ain’t gon’ be no mass vigils, mourners, or blaring trumpets/
When punks like you get punished the public can’t get enough b!tch/
Yo,
Only a flaming f@ggot would ever write “faggy-ass”/
You’ve prolly been robbed for baggies, been b!tch slapped and gagged/
Been bragged about by your b!tch moms to her girlfriends/
Like “My son’s in Rivalturf, have you ever heard of him?”/
“I think that he might be the best yet up on the net”/
“Him and Ill Fam made a lil’ clan like Dip Set”/
“They boast about who’s clocks they cleaned, and their glocks that gleam”/
“How the block’s locked with rocks, they got lots a cream”/
“Speaking of cream, girlfiend I like lots of cream”/
“He taught me how to suck cock good, gave me props and green”/
That’s four and 0 kiddies, but who the fukks countin’/
I’ll see you, Proof, and Jerry up on mushroom mountain/
Alright ya'll, cast your votes.
Mr.Lyrical Content
04-12-06, 12:31 AM
Cot damn, you really did take all night to write that shyt. Went through all my old threads all the way back to 2003, posting links and shyt. WTF.
And your rhythm is horrible.
It's all good though:
The truth is, you'll prolly end up like Proof did/
Slick talking in the booth’ll get you breathin’ through tubes kid/
A few up in your ribs and you’ll be usin’ a bib/
Too many in the lid and you’ll be blue in the lips/
Catch one in the stomach, you’ll just get fukked up from it/
But even if you die, what you write won’t get published/
Ain’t gon’ be no mass vigils, mourners, or blaring trumpets/
When punks like you get punished the public can’t get enough b!tch/
Yo,
Only a flaming f@ggot would ever write “faggy-ass”/
You’ve prolly been robbed for baggies, been b!tch slapped and gagged/
Been bragged about by your b!tch moms to her girlfriends/
Like “My son’s in Rivalturf, have you ever heard of him?”/
“I think that he might be the best yet up on the net”/
“Him and Ill Fam made a lil’ clan like Dip Set”/
“They boast about who’s clocks they cleaned, and their glocks that gleam”/
“How the block’s locked with rocks, they got lots a cream”/
“Speaking of cream, girlfiend I like lots of cream”/
“He taught me how to suck cock good, gave me props and green”/
That’s four and 0 kiddies, but who the fukks countin’/
I’ll see you, Proof, and Jerry up on mushroom mountain/
Alright ya'll, cast your votes.
I see you couldnt stay away from the homo stuff (smh)
Plus on top of that you got two verses vs. my one
Either you extremly dumb or too facinated with cum
To realize you outclassed, turned outcast for always talkin about ass
If it doesnt make us laugh, Then you a *** :yes: Thats money in the bag
And this sh!ts not even funny, its fukkin sad
You are pitiful, hypocritical, and only cynical when speakin on a males genitals
And you only come off as decent in small intervals
This is speaking in gerneral, words speak is heat seeking
Take out your weakling sentinels on perennial meetings
If all you got to talk about is venereal bleeding
Take the 50cent blueprint to new hieghts
And make sho' the people down with the rainbow dont lose rights
I dont even want you apart of my race, I hope this dudes white
Let me not lose sight, ignite the flames via verbals
And Lyrically rhyme circles around your neck to murk you
You cant rhyme @ nite & its past your curfew
Now run-a-long b!tch before I don the mask & :smurf: you
If you have to ask, the answer is yo' ass turned purple (no homo) :bustback:
RIVALturf
neither were amazing but mr.lyrical content was just horrible
Well, if this is the only vote, then I guess I win again.
That's 4-0 or 5-0, I'm losing count.
Wordsmyth
04-12-06, 09:41 PM
I dunno I'm leaning toward Mr. Lyrical this trip, the stucture was fuked but it had decent flow and nice multi's at points.
Vote MLC
Courtdog
04-13-06, 01:53 AM
Well, if this is the only vote, then I guess I win again.
That's 4-0 or 5-0, I'm losing count.
Ghost, word of advice.
You cant keep acting like you won a match-up everytime you get one vote :laugh:
Your making yourself look like a clown ass niqqa everytime you do :yes:
The voting etiqutte is 3-0 K.O. or 1st to 5 votes.
Just wait it out a day or two and this'll come to its conclusion. You can always start another battle if your that eager to rip thru all that sohh has to offer.
Hope I been helpful.... Hollaback!!!
Ghost, word of advice.
You cant keep acting like you won a match-up everytime you get one vote :laugh:
Your making yourself look like a clown ass niqqa everytime you do :yes:
The voting etiqutte is 3-0 K.O. or 1st to 5 votes.
Just wait it out a day or two and this'll come to its conclusion. You can always start another battle if your that eager to rip thru all that sohh has to offer.
Hope I been helpful.... Hollaback!!!
What's your vote?
Ghost, word of advice.
You cant keep acting like you won a match-up everytime you get one vote :laugh:
Your making yourself look like a clown ass niqqa everytime you do :yes:
The voting etiqutte is 3-0 K.O. or 1st to 5 votes.
Just wait it out a day or two and this'll come to its conclusion. You can always start another battle if your that eager to rip thru all that sohh has to offer.
Hope I been helpful.... Hollaback!!!
Who the f*ck is this dude?
lol...
ghost9, good sh*t, man... i'm throwing my vote your way on the first and Second round. Mr. Lyrical Content was just a bit watered down for me. Basic rhymes, nothing hitting. Ghost had more direct things to say, and attacked more focused with his sh*t.
I could break that down more if need be, guys.
Peace.
Who the f*ck is this dude?
lol...
ghost9, good sh*t, man... i'm throwing my vote your way on the first and Second round. Mr. Lyrical Content was just a bit watered down for me. Basic rhymes, nothing hitting. Ghost had more direct things to say, and attacked more focused with his sh*t.
I could break that down more if need be, guys.
Peace.
Good lookin' out.
Break it down brother.
Yeah, I'm narcissitic, wanna fight about it!
nah, but on the real, it ain't often that people take time break down something you wrote. So if you willing to, break down all four rhymes and tell us what you think.
It can only make us better.
ghost9
Ay yo, Lyrical, are you mad that I exposed you/
I ain't mean any harm, I just figured it was old news/
- I'm under the impression that the first bar of every verse should set precedent. Should be ill. You drop heavy here and follow up with the rest of the verse. The opposite emcee's first bar should follow suit... it's what makes the battle exciting, and is what really puts both of your styles against each other's. This was a semi-weak opening for me, but at least you tried saying something directly about... a sort of broad statement.
You know the way that you and Coates be bickerin'/
Be nit-pickin' bout if his prick is bigger than/
Mr. Ill Fam, the lil’ stan, the neighborhood milk man/
Who spilt your box of crayons in the sandlot then ran/
- This is hot. Nice play and attack with the rhyme scheme. Executed well. You won't find this sort of thought out attack in Mr. Lyrical Content's verse, and this is why you beat him in my opinion.
Yeah, I’ll battle both of you, oops, I mean your whole crew/
Troops can’t even hold the frontlines cause I broke through/
- Second line was weak. Following with a difficult rhyme scheme will do that, and most emcees reading the verse know, so we kind of look for how you rhyme the words, the flow of it. You came up a bit short in that respect here.
It’s use-less for-you to use ex-cu-ses/
When you-said you-bet that you can beat-who’s-best/
But who’s-best is-proved by who can be ruth-less/
- I know i'm breaking up this section with what's below, but i have to for a second here... the-whole-attaching-words for stressing the flow/rhymes of the bar isn't something you should generally do, or at least i think so. I'm inclined to say it takes from the integrity of what you're writing. Beyond that i have to say these three lines forced, out of proportion... or, to be brief, FILLER.
Who can be abusive, let-loose, and then lose-grip/
You’ve moved-bricks? I-bet, your words have just bruised-sets/
I’ve proven who’s the best-b!tch, this is all you-get/
So who's-next?
- I like the sudden end, and that sh*t is hard to do, lol. But still, the way you're trying to carry the scheme is killing the content.
And stop trying to be a gangsta!
- - -
Mr. Lyrical Content
Stop trying to be a ******! Bring yo faggy-ass out that closet
Its logic, since everyone of your rhymes is homo-erotic
- Great opening. Relative.
That Ghost9 & his pop's relationship was more than platonic
Now its taking its toll on the "Laveranues Coles" of Sohh!
- First, platonic and homo-erotic doesn't rhyme. You can dispute that all you want, but it doesn't rhyme. Second, the first line doesn't make sense. And third, you lose a lot of points when you start saying sh*t that simply doesn't make sense. In most cases, you'll lose the whole sh*t with a pose like that.
So now your known as a queer
And it appears, that felix tito trinidad will have a lot mo' competition this year
- Nice line, even though the set-up wasn't that great. I still got the punch, so good sh*t. The link sh*t isn't something i like, though. I just want to read your verse. Unless you're unearthing him biting off someone, don't link me to sh*t i'm going to have to read while i'm checking your verse. Just breaks you up for me.
To everyone its clear
This kid is a fukkin loser
Even before you started makin' threads about the openings of hooters
- Weak line. You took time out of your verse to point that out? I would have put in some hard punch instead! There's a lot of opportunity wasted when you focuse on a little weak point.
Your mind moves too slow, not fast enough for versus
You'll go from nurses, to hearses, to under the dirt b!tch
RIVALturf ruthlessly disperses the worthless
With flawless victories
Cause I'm perfect with the word flips
And quotes like these only mean you nervous!
- i like the rhyme scheme, i hate the way you break the lines up. I actually break my lines up this way when my scheme is like that:
a,
b /
a,
b /
Which is how you did it, but it's really f*cking hard to do because you have to f*ck with syllables moreso than other schemes, and the accents on the words have to stress in a certain way for the flow to really roll off for the reader (ie. saying it aloud). For you, it didn't happen (keep in mind i'm not saying you can't make it happen!). Also, the f*cking content's weak, man! Put some more thought into attacking dude. Be innovative and stay away from cliches!
Mr.Lyrical Content
04-15-06, 04:29 PM
You know the way that you and Coates be bickerin'/
Be nit-pickin' bout if his prick is bigger than/
Mr. Ill Fam, the lil’ stan, the neighborhood milk man/
Who spilt your box of crayons in the sandlot then ran/
- This is hot. Nice play and attack with the rhyme scheme. Executed well. You won't find this sort of thought out attack in Mr. Lyrical Content's verse, and this is why you beat him in my opinion.
Are you serious? Thats the lines that gave him the battle?
WoW :ohmy:
Are you serious? Thats the lines that gave him the battle?
WoW :ohmy:
I Don't defend my votes. But when you get it mixed up, that's when i have to say something. The fact that his sh*t was plotted, thought out... in GENERAL, is what took it from you in comparison. The quotes bars were an example of that.
ILL_FAM
04-16-06, 09:24 AM
ghost 9 on a ghost grind....
why u getting at me hmm...jealous little b1tch....
fairs dues and do wat u like lyrical content gonna body u tonight.....
theman080
04-16-06, 12:09 PM
Um Ill Fam, you better rep your shyt in the rivalhood tourney, you put your name down now rep your spot...
In other news, Ghost has got this, displayed an overall better skill set, so what can I say. Each had some simplified punches, none of it was really fiyah but Ghost got this firmly in hand.
Um Ill Fam, you better rep your shyt in the rivalhood tourney, you put your name down now rep your spot...
In other news, Ghost has got this, displayed an overall better skill set, so what can I say. Each had some simplified punches, none of it was really fiyah but Ghost got this firmly in hand.
:yes:
Child Proof
05-04-06, 09:35 AM
I'll give my vote to Ghost9, both verses were pretty simplistic, nothing really ill about em. Ghost had the MUCH better flow though.
Hey Ghost we should get a battle going, since you actually on here...let me know if you wit it. I won't be able to drop till later tonight though.
up (Because battles 'round here are rare).
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