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Dragonfly
04-09-06, 06:47 PM
I am
empty like a well
once spilling over
in abundance
holding out my hands
expecting another chance
to embrace you.
I see
the dark and
empty night
stretching out before me
invoking promises that you might
return.
I can
feel your touch
even as you recoil from me
producing an electricity
designed to push away
what only draws me closer.
I won't
look into your eyes
and acknowledge the pain
you've brought with you
tonight while
the moon shines overhead
and we deserve to taste elation.
I drink
of your being
allowing your essence
to seep through my pores
competing only for space
with tears of my own
on an affection danger zone.

homeyjay
04-10-06, 04:05 PM
Very poetic piece, me likes.

HipHop4ever
04-10-06, 04:13 PM
ooooh weeee that's some lover **** for real

Dragonfly
04-12-06, 03:48 AM
Thank you. I'm pretty nervous about sharing my work but I've got too many notebooks to keep all this to myself so...

Irish-dipstick
04-12-06, 04:38 AM
hold up.....

stop rewind....

hotness...

could have said it better....

peace....

Con FusIon
04-19-06, 10:19 AM
This is nice.