Muddywaters

[Wordsmyth]

First verse more to come later.....

Separated by socioeconomical differences the choices are limitless
You can be Catholic’s or Semitist Southern Baptist or Witnesses
citizens or immigrants political miscreants science majors or chemists
CEO’s with apprentices I’m only stating my premises
with my name in parenthesis inundating these sentences
The only difference is I don’t follow the lead of dictators who wallow in greed
Cause walking the earth surface in search of solace exceeds
The thirst of knowledge and the girth of worthless college degrees
It’s all carnage to me whether you’re weak or have courage its deceit and disparage
If we can’t concede to repair it…. than what shall the meek ones inherit?!

Lil feed appreciated.. :smoker:

[theman080]

that shyt flowed crazy, kept it goin too, I'll give a more in depth response once you finish, good to see some quality work gettin done in the open mic

[Wordsmyth]

that shyt flowed crazy, kept it goin too, I'll give a more in depth response once you finish, good to see some quality work gettin done in the open mic

Good lookin, I'm thinking of simplifying the first part some, it's a tounge twister. Just wanted to see what peeps felt about the content and direction.

[Con FusIon]

I like this. Good flow, good word choice, I could see it spit and it'd sound ill. Nice one. Finish it up man.

[Wordsmyth]

I like this. Good flow, good word choice, I could see it spit and it'd sound ill. Nice one. Finish it up man.

Appreciated!!