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ILL_FAM
04-04-06, 02:06 PM
fcuk sh!t i am smoking never choking
i take it like a man and keep toking
i smoke get high come at me i dear
this hood getting disasterious i swear....

fcuk sh!t im smoking i blow it and
leave u choking who speaks i leave
u out spoken i leave ur jaw broken
the missing key like u wanna be
me.....

from the boy to the man to king, to the steps the mic to the hiphop king
to the iced out bling, u on the right so im the don's left wing//
this verges on some gangsta ish, but never reaches that height
i dont drop polite i do bite, but not rhymes when it comes that i write//
...dam right i aint call jay-z, i get paid on the streets u cant tell me to stop
less u paying me, are u didn't think so..so i remain in plain sight even mr. wonder can see// the dope deals i make, make u look fake keep ur mouth shut
u the under mut, a real slut i hit u in the gut dont hold out i dont take pay cuts// this verse is about me growing more or less and becoming king, being able to get the bling what i mean, dam hommie counting the green//

fcuk sh!t i am smoking never choking
i take it like a man and keep toking
i smoke get high come at me i dear
this hood getting disasterious i swear....

fcuk sh!t im smoking i blow it and
leave u choking who speaks i leave
u out spoken i leave ur jaw broken
the missing key like u wanna be
me.....

now i got my money, got lines of endless hot honeys, i fcuk each one like
rabbits and create bunnys kinda a funny i leave ur ass runny//
but it is funny how before money i got jack sh!t, now every night atleast
5 asses get hit every girl get spilt plz dont judge i took a while for me
to evolve me spit// i got this locked like i got the corner blocked like i got
ya'll clocked like ya'll mock// i'll wrap any one is plastic, who tries me for
my dimes u get blasted, dont take me past it cause im elastic, i spring back
u fcuking spastic// only god can part me from my green, ur attitude is obscene, but i could be parted even quick than fought death is a routine
then i played the scene i feel unclean will i see the sun set when im eighteen.... i got doubts//

fcuk sh!t i am smoking never choking
i take it like a man and keep toking
i smoke get high come at me i dear
this hood getting disasterious i swear....

fcuk sh!t im smoking i blow it and
leave u choking who speaks i leave
u out spoken i leave ur jaw broken
the missing key like u wanna be
me.....

if u could see the money grappin im seeing, u'd be ashamed to be a human
bein, cause this sh!t is corupt like the political and government machine//
beating on peeps is to get u depressed, keeping me from money is aka
house arrest i'd rather take one in the chest...but im not gonna cause
im smarter than that smarter than a intellgience test im simply the best//
im no gangsta but many hommies are already buried, i get beef that makes
no money i see it and it gets perried i swear it, my rhymes are vaired but i gotta call it a day fcuking sh!t getting hurried like hot curry...cause heart burn//

fcuk sh!t i am smoking never choking
i take it like a man and keep toking
i smoke get high come at me i dear
this hood getting disasterious i swear....

fcuk sh!t im smoking i blow it and
leave u choking who speaks i leave
u out spoken i leave ur jaw broken
the missing key like u wanna be
me.....

ILL_FAM
04-04-06, 02:52 PM
wat


look im just trying to take on the advice the man and wordsmyth try to give me, about the syllables and i looked at #1rappers structure and tried to lay it out similar to his but both didnt go as well as i thought.....

i aint no biter i done this my self i haven't stole it from this irish dude....

#1rapper
04-04-06, 03:51 PM
nah, i dont think this is irish, but i do have a question.....


wats up with the weird ass avatar

ILL_FAM
04-04-06, 06:01 PM
dunno thought it was a bit funny just to have a taliban avater their a bunch of faggots anyway.....

ur the first to notice :yes:


anyway did anyone think the drop was an improvement or a step in the wrong direction....

ILL_FAM
04-05-06, 06:52 PM
coates are u ok....

ur writing a little paranoid....

both those words are common....