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ILL_FAM
04-01-06, 06:41 AM
stepping up my game to remain in fame
to remain in the frame, to keep my foot
in the door ya'll want more, who i am who
u want i just to me what u want what see
all u'll see is true me

diggy dummy i dun d1cked u hunny i lose this flurry
i leave ur ass in hurry a hit u wit the mac i leave
eyes all blurry like u snorting hot curry//
but like curry im real hot stuff not real buff i like
to get a little ruff like a dominatrix i cant get
enuff// but no homo i take no bono i wax cuntz
and im going solo or sulu i linch u and ur fake crew//
but when i say this im dropping a lyrical diss
but look i aint gangsta i just drop gangsta ish
i gangsta piss on ur sh!t like u a wangsta snitch//
but im a party guy im 3-6 man i stay fly till i die
im ill to the pill so i kill at will in shelf defence man
there aint no thrills//

stepping up my game to remain in fame
to remain in the frame, to keep my foot
in the door ya'll want more, who i am who
u want i just to me what u want what see
all u'll see is true me

ok on a new tone baby dont cry even though ya
got no money and ur duke got a drive-by// i'm ur guardian
angel i swift down and safe u i made u i cant look while
the play u i just sake my and say dam itz ok u a fool//
but i aint never been like that u only human atleast u
aint a new man a made man in this world of dreams,
i know they could of took ur life but they raped u and let
u ly there u gonna die there but here i come i wont let
u live my life the life of a bum//
thats how im gone and aint no one remember me
remember as an angel not a buster g//


stepping up my game to remain in fame
to remain in the frame, to keep my foot
in the door ya'll want more, who i am who
u want i just to me what u want what see
all u'll see is true me



this is all i got without straining my brain.

Wordsmyth
04-01-06, 09:41 AM
Pick a topic
Write a whole verse relative to that topic
Broaden your vocabulary use words with at least 2 syllables
Learn what metaphors are and use them
Try to use multiple syllables in your rhyme scheme but do not over use them to the point of sacrficing(sp) content.
CONTENT is the most important part about a verse, if you are not rhyming about anything in particular unless it's a freestyle then what's the point of the drop.....

PS...Make sure you drop feedback on other cats as well.
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ILL_FAM
04-02-06, 08:28 AM
yeah thanxz i understand no problem i gotta get my sh!t together